for Naruto & the Rebuilt Hidden Whirlpool Village5/8/2015 c2 Reaver216
it is to short but i do hope you'll fix that soon
it is to short but i do hope you'll fix that soon
6/28/2014 c2 kagome higurashi
please write some more. what happens next.
please write some more. what happens next.
8/23/2013 c1 
1God-ShadowEx100
wow sorry but i saw this and had to comment, you a god damn cock sucking faggot who needs to be brutally fucking killed like the rest of your fucking sick mentally unstable kind.
1God-ShadowEx100wow sorry but i saw this and had to comment, you a god damn cock sucking faggot who needs to be brutally fucking killed like the rest of your fucking sick mentally unstable kind.
8/22/2013 c2 2Devilish Rook
I'm really confused, what's happening in the story. Some of plot and the events in it are jumbled all around and you just stick in random characters. Even I'm confused I will still stick around to find out what's happening in the story. Please understand my distress, I love this story but I'm confused.
2Devilish RookI'm really confused, what's happening in the story. Some of plot and the events in it are jumbled all around and you just stick in random characters. Even I'm confused I will still stick around to find out what's happening in the story. Please understand my distress, I love this story but I'm confused.