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4/30/2020 c1 3Ayerim Herrera
Love the Nara boys
1/3/2018 c2 5Yllems
This was such a great portrayal of the Nara family. I wasn't really a fan of the nag wife/lazy husband dynamic in the show since it seemed like an cartoonish (anime-ish) cliche, but you managed to make me come around on it by making it more nuanced. It's so nice to see a family that is loving but not cutesy or perfect. I'm going to imagine that this is the relationship the writers were going for because they all feel so believable. Even toddler Shikamaru feels in character. It's been a while since you posted, so I don't even know if you're still connected to your account, but thank you for writing.
5/3/2016 c2 2Sherlock's Pipe And Hat
This was so cute!
11/26/2013 c2 110th Squad 3rd Seat
Peace-piece
Is Shika allergic to nuts?
11/26/2013 c1 10th Squad 3rd Seat
Poor Shika.
Dx
8/17/2013 c1 10lady kae
It's cute but I also wonder about Choza's reaction when he finds out that his gift nearly killed his friend's son
7/23/2013 c2 5KIBucs15
Gosh it was so freaking cute! U should really make another story like this but continue it!
7/11/2013 c1 3DarkAngelsBlood1
Lovely story. Please continue. I'm eager to read more.
7/9/2013 c1 8Mommy Bear
Great story going here. Shikaku needs to learn to know his son and his son needs to learn to know him. I like the quick tender moments between mom and dad. Nice story

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