
5/17/2014 c4 Guest
Write more its awesome!
Write more its awesome!
5/17/2014 c15 MaxBookWorm
This is fairly good! ;) Sorry. I'm hard to please, especially when it comes to writing. You should create your own account! ;)
This is fairly good! ;) Sorry. I'm hard to please, especially when it comes to writing. You should create your own account! ;)
5/17/2014 c14 MaxBookWorm
I like bothe P.O.V.s. I like when you switch them out. This is okay, but not your best. :(
I like bothe P.O.V.s. I like when you switch them out. This is okay, but not your best. :(
5/16/2014 c10 MaxBookWorm
Nice after note. Can't they be bubblegum-pink and barf rainbow sparkles and apple pie?!
Nice after note. Can't they be bubblegum-pink and barf rainbow sparkles and apple pie?!
5/16/2014 c5 MaxBookWorm
I like your cliffhangers! This is a great story! Can't wait to read more! ;)
I like your cliffhangers! This is a great story! Can't wait to read more! ;)