
1/23 c12 Grammar Fiend
You wrote: “ Lupin," the gargoyle said. "Password?"
"You're on first name terms with Dumbledore's gargoyle?"”
‘Lupin’ is NOT a first name.
You wrote: “ Lupin," the gargoyle said. "Password?"
"You're on first name terms with Dumbledore's gargoyle?"”
‘Lupin’ is NOT a first name.
8/11/2024 c40 Shin Shin Tanren
I really don't understand Why you have Matt And Remus putting up with greyback.
If he's that horrible A person And he keeps turning people , Remus being a big giant pussy, is putting more people at risk.
He's a wanted criminal , Tonks could have brought a gun with silver bullets And shot him , and then rubbed silver nitrate in the wounds . No more grayback And tonxie could have just aparated out
I really don't understand Why you have Matt And Remus putting up with greyback.
If he's that horrible A person And he keeps turning people , Remus being a big giant pussy, is putting more people at risk.
He's a wanted criminal , Tonks could have brought a gun with silver bullets And shot him , and then rubbed silver nitrate in the wounds . No more grayback And tonxie could have just aparated out
8/1/2024 c79 Alwin-nl
Well, holy damn. Good thing they didn’t start throwing unforgivable around… Which would have been understandable in their situation…
Well, holy damn. Good thing they didn’t start throwing unforgivable around… Which would have been understandable in their situation…
7/30/2024 c36 Alwin-nl
Very much enjoying this so far, and I love the little peeks into the Weasley lives. I hope Harry meets them soon!
Very much enjoying this so far, and I love the little peeks into the Weasley lives. I hope Harry meets them soon!
7/26/2024 c27 bvc17
Go Narcissa! I hope there’s more of her inner thoughts/conflict to come. She seems to have a high importance of family and torn up over what happened to jet’s, not wanting to repeat the same mistakes of the people before.
Go Narcissa! I hope there’s more of her inner thoughts/conflict to come. She seems to have a high importance of family and torn up over what happened to jet’s, not wanting to repeat the same mistakes of the people before.
6/9/2024 c80 Doctor Lumos
Certainly a lot of unexpected twists and turns. I will say that after surviving a war, and thinking that others had died, Both sirius and Marlena would have used spells more extreme than just incapacitating their opponents. Particularly when you are outnumbered, you cannot affor the luxury of allowing them to get back into the battle. Having faced Deatheaters before, and beleiving these were similarly supporters of Voldemort, they would have taken some out permanently.
Also, since Remus was aware that the concern about what might be in Harry's scar had nothing to do with the supposed snake society, would he have not arranged to have Dumbledore talk with Sirius? How could he have so little concern for Harry's wellbeing?
I did enjoy it though.
Certainly a lot of unexpected twists and turns. I will say that after surviving a war, and thinking that others had died, Both sirius and Marlena would have used spells more extreme than just incapacitating their opponents. Particularly when you are outnumbered, you cannot affor the luxury of allowing them to get back into the battle. Having faced Deatheaters before, and beleiving these were similarly supporters of Voldemort, they would have taken some out permanently.
Also, since Remus was aware that the concern about what might be in Harry's scar had nothing to do with the supposed snake society, would he have not arranged to have Dumbledore talk with Sirius? How could he have so little concern for Harry's wellbeing?
I did enjoy it though.
5/18/2024 c56 Guest
11 chapters before the trial is complete? Filler. Rambling. Disconnected side trips from the actual plot. I skippedthru theladt 10 chaptersin a coupleof minutes. I'm giving up on this story. Can't wade through multiple sequels.
11 chapters before the trial is complete? Filler. Rambling. Disconnected side trips from the actual plot. I skippedthru theladt 10 chaptersin a coupleof minutes. I'm giving up on this story. Can't wade through multiple sequels.
5/18/2024 c36 Guest
DITCH THE #! WAND. It is useless and IT'S GONNA LAND YOU ALL IN AZKABAN...POSSIBLY DEAD AND IN AZKABAN! very good story. Does have some seemingly pointless ramblings, but overall it's interesting and well written.
DITCH THE #! WAND. It is useless and IT'S GONNA LAND YOU ALL IN AZKABAN...POSSIBLY DEAD AND IN AZKABAN! very good story. Does have some seemingly pointless ramblings, but overall it's interesting and well written.
5/18/2024 c31 Guest
Just leave Harry's wand behind. It's more trouble than it's worth!
Just leave Harry's wand behind. It's more trouble than it's worth!
5/18/2024 c29 Guest
Moony cleared his throat and began to explain the next photograph; it was of James and Moony in a cavernous (ridiculous size)room – there were house elves at the edges of the room, looking anxious, so Harry guessed it was a kitchen - standing at the head of at least seventy, (ridiculous number) human sized ( ridiculous size) gingerbread men. As Harry watched, Padfoot and Peter, who were each riding (ridiculously) the shoulders of their own gingerbread – iced in red instead of James and Moony's white – led a charge.
"We had battles all through the school," (ridiculous) Padfoot said fondly. "It was just a distraction, though; that night, we sent our soldiers to each of the common rooms and all of the teachers' quarters and had them take everyone out onto the grounds."...and of course everyone, including staff, did their bidding. Must have used Imperious.
"What was out there?" Harry asked.
"Blankets and campfires. And then a fireworks display," (er. yeah) Moony said, grinning. He dug through the pile of photographs and pulled one out. It showed fireworks exploding in the dark, starry sky. Below it, outlined by the fires Moony had mentioned, were the staff and students of Hogwarts, as well as the gingerbread men.
"Did you get a detention for this?"
"One for every gingerbread man," Moony said wryly. "But it was split between the four of us – worked out to about forty each – and McGonagall was so impressed (I bet) by our spell-work she didn't take points." 70 divided by 4 is 17.5. Utter nonsense.
Moony cleared his throat and began to explain the next photograph; it was of James and Moony in a cavernous (ridiculous size)room – there were house elves at the edges of the room, looking anxious, so Harry guessed it was a kitchen - standing at the head of at least seventy, (ridiculous number) human sized ( ridiculous size) gingerbread men. As Harry watched, Padfoot and Peter, who were each riding (ridiculously) the shoulders of their own gingerbread – iced in red instead of James and Moony's white – led a charge.
"We had battles all through the school," (ridiculous) Padfoot said fondly. "It was just a distraction, though; that night, we sent our soldiers to each of the common rooms and all of the teachers' quarters and had them take everyone out onto the grounds."...and of course everyone, including staff, did their bidding. Must have used Imperious.
"What was out there?" Harry asked.
"Blankets and campfires. And then a fireworks display," (er. yeah) Moony said, grinning. He dug through the pile of photographs and pulled one out. It showed fireworks exploding in the dark, starry sky. Below it, outlined by the fires Moony had mentioned, were the staff and students of Hogwarts, as well as the gingerbread men.
"Did you get a detention for this?"
"One for every gingerbread man," Moony said wryly. "But it was split between the four of us – worked out to about forty each – and McGonagall was so impressed (I bet) by our spell-work she didn't take points." 70 divided by 4 is 17.5. Utter nonsense.
5/17/2024 c58 evymel
Can McKinnon actually hide if the aurors or Sirius just… send her an owl? With the spell that tracks the coordinates that was mentioned ages ago? Or just track the owl? She got no wand to renew any charms that keeps owls as way or hide her
Can McKinnon actually hide if the aurors or Sirius just… send her an owl? With the spell that tracks the coordinates that was mentioned ages ago? Or just track the owl? She got no wand to renew any charms that keeps owls as way or hide her
5/17/2024 c57 evymel
It’s funny, malfoy is now more then convinced that Harry is definitely a dark lord after he used wandless imperio on Peter? Oh shit right Severus told him of the life debt, it could have been funny though
It’s funny, malfoy is now more then convinced that Harry is definitely a dark lord after he used wandless imperio on Peter? Oh shit right Severus told him of the life debt, it could have been funny though
5/17/2024 c56 evymel
I hope best girl McKinnon doesn’t kill herself from the hit of loathing and depression but she is in the lowest she ever was probably
I hope best girl McKinnon doesn’t kill herself from the hit of loathing and depression but she is in the lowest she ever was probably
5/16/2024 c25 evymel
Damn, and each near miss is actually pushing Sirius to think more, to be more creative, the same for Harry, Harry learns, I would wager that Harry gains experience and Sirius regains confidence, the next time it would not be harder, it would be easier! Harry would react faster and more decisively, knowing what to do, Sirius won’t dumbly question Remus and stand there having a conversation near a fire place, constant vigilance, they would be more cautious, not standing near a dangerous entry,
Damn, and each near miss is actually pushing Sirius to think more, to be more creative, the same for Harry, Harry learns, I would wager that Harry gains experience and Sirius regains confidence, the next time it would not be harder, it would be easier! Harry would react faster and more decisively, knowing what to do, Sirius won’t dumbly question Remus and stand there having a conversation near a fire place, constant vigilance, they would be more cautious, not standing near a dangerous entry,