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6/11/2015 c1 Guest
Keep going please
9/21/2013 c1 overninethousand
here; sesshomaruandrinfaq . blogspot . com
sesshomaruandkagurafaq . blogspot . com
8/26/2013 c1 4iMiniRedCupcake
*-* Keep it going please! You know we all want that damn Naraku to die :'D
7/29/2013 c1 AnonReviewer
This story has a lot of promise! Looking forward to the updates
7/9/2013 c1 1xEmptySpace
I think this is an okay fanfiction, it doesn't bring in the "wow" factor but it's interesting to a degree. Something to look at would be Kagura's character because she seemed a little out of role. In my opinion she's rational and rebellious but from what I just read she seemed like a baby and the opposite of rational. Making a fuss towards Sesshomaru in such manner surprised me, because I see her more strong willed and hard headed. Also Sesshomaru's decision to not run away with her puzzled me, after all Sesshomaru is viewed as one of the strongest demons there is, so he could've protected her from harms way. Taking orders from Naraku seemed out of play from a long shot, I recommend you re-analyze their character once more so you have a clear understanding of their personality. Overall like I said I think this was okay for your first fanfiction. Keep on writing!
7/9/2013 c1 3ultranostalgia
good start!

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