for Carrot Flavored Comfort10/27/2015 c1 
50Princess Mercy Goetia
I'm a huge fan of Elliot. While he has the palette of a rabbit (Which we all know he is), he has the loyal heart of a pet dog (which he seems to believe he is.) The story was sweet, and it shows just how much Alice means to him. I'll be writing my own stories soon, so please read them when I have. Thanks!
50Princess Mercy GoetiaI'm a huge fan of Elliot. While he has the palette of a rabbit (Which we all know he is), he has the loyal heart of a pet dog (which he seems to believe he is.) The story was sweet, and it shows just how much Alice means to him. I'll be writing my own stories soon, so please read them when I have. Thanks!
1/7/2014 c1 ilovepandasalot
Honestly I thought it was quite short and you could have continued it and made it more exciting if like idk Blood burst in and said something like "Oh? Proving my point I see" it seems like something he'd do but really nice story I'd say next time break it up a bit like smaller paragraphs instead of a wall of text but that's really my only complaint and I just like long stories that's my personal complaint that you don't have to take to heart but really just space it a bit and it's perfect. I know a giant run on sentence but that's how I talk in real life so yeah people say I talk really fast ..
Honestly I thought it was quite short and you could have continued it and made it more exciting if like idk Blood burst in and said something like "Oh? Proving my point I see" it seems like something he'd do but really nice story I'd say next time break it up a bit like smaller paragraphs instead of a wall of text but that's really my only complaint and I just like long stories that's my personal complaint that you don't have to take to heart but really just space it a bit and it's perfect. I know a giant run on sentence but that's how I talk in real life so yeah people say I talk really fast ..
7/11/2013 c1 10slashingfruit101
this was a cute little one shot! I just had to awww at the end. great story! I hope you write another soon.
10slashingfruit101this was a cute little one shot! I just had to awww at the end. great story! I hope you write another soon.
7/11/2013 c1 4Animegirl721
I love this! I absolutely adore the Elliot and Alice pairing. It's just too cute! This is totally what should have happened! Elliot is such a cute RABBIT ;)
4Animegirl721I love this! I absolutely adore the Elliot and Alice pairing. It's just too cute! This is totally what should have happened! Elliot is such a cute RABBIT ;)