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7/23/2013 c1 9Katycat1970
awww - now I LOVE this one...

LOVED the kiss! I love how you write their kisses - always so many feelings... *sigh*

ha ha - loved Charlie coming into them - especially looking out for Mac... :)

Great little scene matey... Loved it!

Thanks for sharing...
xx
7/13/2013 c1 37iworkwithpens
See Sorkin! That's what we need from a pushing up against the wall scene! Take note!

A million thanks for the kiss, and for protective Charlie, and even for the sad realization on Mac's part that the kiss wasn't real yet...but it could be...soon.

Oh just thank you for a lovely little bit of fluff!
7/13/2013 c1 14lilacmermaid33
You do such a great job with the dialogue here, especially Mac. I love her rant at the beginning - it sounds exactly like her in the hospital scene. And I LOVE this line:

["Billy, either we're a team and you want me in your ear, or I've finally outstayed my welcome and I should be helping you find a suitable replacement. What's your pleasure?"]
7/11/2013 c1 Jacks in my head
Oh I like this one also! Although I love Will and Mac; Charlie may be my favorite character. I love how you added him in and know he will be protective if Mac. Thanks for posting! It seems like S2 will never get here.

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