for Thorns of the Black Rose11/4/2015 c7 sim545
This is a great story. Please continue it. I want to know how everything turns out.
This is a great story. Please continue it. I want to know how everything turns out.
1/31/2015 c7 
14Cinderella Girl626
Ahh I'm scared! How are they all going to get out of this mess?! How are Leo and luna gonna get yusei?! And what about Akiza?!
Please continue! I need to know what happens next! :3
14Cinderella Girl626Ahh I'm scared! How are they all going to get out of this mess?! How are Leo and luna gonna get yusei?! And what about Akiza?!
Please continue! I need to know what happens next! :3
11/3/2014 c7 RenesmeVivio
I knew what troubles you get with college and stuff, I can't focus on million things in the same time. Anyhow your story is very excited, I can't wait until the next chapter keep going
I knew what troubles you get with college and stuff, I can't focus on million things in the same time. Anyhow your story is very excited, I can't wait until the next chapter keep going
10/25/2014 c5 RenesmeVivio
Hmmmm new prediction why I think that Sabrina has something bad to do ... Philis can sense something wow interesting
Hmmmm new prediction why I think that Sabrina has something bad to do ... Philis can sense something wow interesting
10/24/2014 c4 RenesmeVivio
Until now it was awsome, I knew that one of my predictions were right if having powers. Yay can't wait for the other chapter.
Until now it was awsome, I knew that one of my predictions were right if having powers. Yay can't wait for the other chapter.
10/22/2014 c3 RenesmeVivio
Wow I never except that will happen. I wonder if the others (Yusei & the twins) will get some sort of power, you know to defense their selfs
Wow I never except that will happen. I wonder if the others (Yusei & the twins) will get some sort of power, you know to defense their selfs
10/22/2014 c2 RenesmeVivio
So touching and lovely this chapter. Okay my predictions is that Divain guy is related to Akiza somehow, ummmmmm maybe her father
So touching and lovely this chapter. Okay my predictions is that Divain guy is related to Akiza somehow, ummmmmm maybe her father
10/21/2014 c1 RenesmeVivio
Wow I'm impressed. The plot of your story is amazing and exciting I can't wait to read the rest
Wow I'm impressed. The plot of your story is amazing and exciting I can't wait to read the rest
10/16/2014 c7 Guest
I give it a 3 out of 10
I give it a 3 out of 10
8/7/2014 c7 StardustOA
This is one of the best stories I've read on this website. Please try to make the next chapter As Soon As Possible. It's quite intriguing :)
This is one of the best stories I've read on this website. Please try to make the next chapter As Soon As Possible. It's quite intriguing :)
7/18/2014 c7 Guest
well leo get some type of power in this in this story
well leo get some type of power in this in this story
7/10/2014 c6 4Yami Bloodspill
I love this story, and I'd like to read more. There was everything I like: action, suspense, adventure, and most logical events in the story that makes this story possible.
I hope this story is not going to stop there and it will continue as well as now!
(Sorry for the mistakes, I often do not speak English, but I read many stories in English instead )
4Yami BloodspillI love this story, and I'd like to read more. There was everything I like: action, suspense, adventure, and most logical events in the story that makes this story possible.
I hope this story is not going to stop there and it will continue as well as now!
(Sorry for the mistakes, I often do not speak English, but I read many stories in English instead )