for Harry Potter and the Tails of Change12/13/2024 c6 AnimeGuy93
this has to be AI generated, there's no personality or feeling in the characters conversations
this has to be AI generated, there's no personality or feeling in the characters conversations
10/14/2024 c3 G Fawkes
I may be older, but I can be known to cuss like A sailor when the occasion strikes, AND used to bounce at several nightclubs and three separate strip clubs, so, no prudes, here. My issue with one phrase used is more to do with "polite", or maybe "class"?
(Strawberry blonde)" hair down to her ass" (para) is kind of cheap and tacky, whereas everything else in the story has been respectful.
No biggy, just pointing it out.
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(More joking than not)
Do you really think Tonks, being Black, would be a strawberry blonde, naturally? I mean, Narcissa dyes her hair blonde. I imagine every other Black since time began to have black hair
I may be older, but I can be known to cuss like A sailor when the occasion strikes, AND used to bounce at several nightclubs and three separate strip clubs, so, no prudes, here. My issue with one phrase used is more to do with "polite", or maybe "class"?
(Strawberry blonde)" hair down to her ass" (para) is kind of cheap and tacky, whereas everything else in the story has been respectful.
No biggy, just pointing it out.
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(More joking than not)
Do you really think Tonks, being Black, would be a strawberry blonde, naturally? I mean, Narcissa dyes her hair blonde. I imagine every other Black since time began to have black hair
10/14/2024 c3 G Fawkes
"Portus" is the incantation to make a portkey, and Tonks wouldn't be authorized to do that. There would be some kind of catchy code word, or even just "activate" to set it off.
"Portus" is the incantation to make a portkey, and Tonks wouldn't be authorized to do that. There would be some kind of catchy code word, or even just "activate" to set it off.
7/17/2024 c10 Remingt00n
I am sorry for your loss.
I hope you have recovered/are recovering. Good luck with your writing. I enjoyed your story.
I am sorry for your loss.
I hope you have recovered/are recovering. Good luck with your writing. I enjoyed your story.
5/12/2024 c10 Niklas b scorpio
More please
More please
5/1/2024 c10 Quaziemoto79
Great Story Line, I have to check back every so often.
Great Story Line, I have to check back every so often.
3/17/2024 c9 
13Freddie Rindklip
Sorry about your loss. Get your life in order before you worry about hobbies such as writing.
13Freddie RindklipSorry about your loss. Get your life in order before you worry about hobbies such as writing.
3/17/2024 c7 Freddie Rindklip
I think Harry is over-powered and way too smart in Chapter 7. Other than that I am enjoying the fic.
I think Harry is over-powered and way too smart in Chapter 7. Other than that I am enjoying the fic.
2/27/2024 c10 3LordNemesis
Will I guess this story is not going to be finished it was an ok story for what I have read.
3LordNemesisWill I guess this story is not going to be finished it was an ok story for what I have read.
12/29/2023 c10 Amethyst2005
I hope life gets better for you, my friend, and that you acheive all that you want to before joining your beloved wife on the Next Great Adventure.
I hope life gets better for you, my friend, and that you acheive all that you want to before joining your beloved wife on the Next Great Adventure.
12/29/2023 c10 Arc-Welder
Beautiful story. I hope you find the time to continue your writing. Sorry to hear about your loss.
Beautiful story. I hope you find the time to continue your writing. Sorry to hear about your loss.