for Brothers in all but Blood9/6/2021 c1 Sakurasrighthandwoman
Oh god... His new name is Naruto Uchiha now... That’s terrifying.. D;
Oh god... His new name is Naruto Uchiha now... That’s terrifying.. D;
6/7/2020 c11 NURUTOFAN
WRITE ! DANG IT
WRITE ! DANG IT
1/11/2020 c11 
12mastercheif1229
Absolutely incredible story so far! I really hope that you continue it at some point! ...though it kind of funny that the chapter in which you made an april fools joke about being that last chapter actually ended up being the last chapter, lol.
12mastercheif1229Absolutely incredible story so far! I really hope that you continue it at some point! ...though it kind of funny that the chapter in which you made an april fools joke about being that last chapter actually ended up being the last chapter, lol.
9/29/2017 c11 Guest
Are you dead? If not continue the goddamn story. If you are, R.I.P.
Are you dead? If not continue the goddamn story. If you are, R.I.P.
7/11/2017 c1 HaremNSHaterNH3
Don't mean to be rude or anything, but NaruSaku and SasuHina are seriously fucked up couples. It's supposed to be NaruHina and SasuSaku, though, I read your profile and I know you are okay with both... but I'm not. Sakura sucks balls, y'know. While she does become a little competent in "Naruto: Shippuden", she still is a useless kunoichi who doesn't deserve poor Naruto. She should just fuck off and go be with the emo bastard, who I do kind of like, but not when he is put with Hinata. Really, they have nothing in common and are complete opposites. Hinata's to good for Sasuke. You should be VERY ashamed to put Naruto and Sakura together and Sasuke and Hinata together. You seem like a good author, but I don't read stories by people who like 4 things: Harems, Lemons, and ESPECIALLY, SasuHina, and NaruSaku. Sorry! Goodbye!:)
Don't mean to be rude or anything, but NaruSaku and SasuHina are seriously fucked up couples. It's supposed to be NaruHina and SasuSaku, though, I read your profile and I know you are okay with both... but I'm not. Sakura sucks balls, y'know. While she does become a little competent in "Naruto: Shippuden", she still is a useless kunoichi who doesn't deserve poor Naruto. She should just fuck off and go be with the emo bastard, who I do kind of like, but not when he is put with Hinata. Really, they have nothing in common and are complete opposites. Hinata's to good for Sasuke. You should be VERY ashamed to put Naruto and Sakura together and Sasuke and Hinata together. You seem like a good author, but I don't read stories by people who like 4 things: Harems, Lemons, and ESPECIALLY, SasuHina, and NaruSaku. Sorry! Goodbye!:)
6/16/2016 c11 3Refraction of Light
I do hope you update this one day. I can get why you wouldn't listen to me but I still hope you do. It actually has a good premise.
3Refraction of LightI do hope you update this one day. I can get why you wouldn't listen to me but I still hope you do. It actually has a good premise.
6/16/2016 c4 Refraction of Light
No offence but considering your author's notes I have to ask. In what way not for her but for the village or for the clan has she been useful? Honestly I have a rather biased view of her. An overexpecting family that constantly compares you to more successful members is high stress. I was the biggest disappointment in such a family. Yet I was actually told once that if I actually lost all confidence like Hinata did I would have literally and legally been disowned. Aside from personal experiences I find her to be a character I can like but not can you clarify for me what makes her useful compared to how you described Sakura?
No offence but considering your author's notes I have to ask. In what way not for her but for the village or for the clan has she been useful? Honestly I have a rather biased view of her. An overexpecting family that constantly compares you to more successful members is high stress. I was the biggest disappointment in such a family. Yet I was actually told once that if I actually lost all confidence like Hinata did I would have literally and legally been disowned. Aside from personal experiences I find her to be a character I can like but not can you clarify for me what makes her useful compared to how you described Sakura?
3/16/2016 c11 Hilarious
i love how you said April fools on this being the last chapter but it really was the last chapter.
Was this all part of your plan?
i love how you said April fools on this being the last chapter but it really was the last chapter.
Was this all part of your plan?
3/14/2016 c11 NarutoLover
This is awesome please update both of your Naruto stories :Element of time(my favorite although this is good two ) and Brothers in all but Blood.
Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaspleasepleasex100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 x infinity
This is awesome please update both of your Naruto stories :Element of time(my favorite although this is good two ) and Brothers in all but Blood.
Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaspleasepleasex100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 x infinity
2/20/2016 c2 sharinganwarMS
Love their relationships so much!
Love their relationships so much!
1/6/2016 c1 Guest
I see that you're back now so will you also be updating this story
I see that you're back now so will you also be updating this story