
7/19/2013 c1
2Ms. Essential
Reading a child point of view, not bad.
But the end just made me surprised with a hint of sympathy for the child.

Reading a child point of view, not bad.
But the end just made me surprised with a hint of sympathy for the child.
7/13/2013 c1 Smile-Chica
Something new and different. I like.
Chapter 1 is detailed and yes Wynter sounds clever for her age but then in the end made me feel sympathy for her.
Chapter 2 is what we all will be waiting for as I wish you luck! x
Something new and different. I like.
Chapter 1 is detailed and yes Wynter sounds clever for her age but then in the end made me feel sympathy for her.
Chapter 2 is what we all will be waiting for as I wish you luck! x
7/13/2013 c1 xXFaith.22Xx
Little Innocent Disasters? Hmm... Nice Headline.
I just wonder what's going to happen in chapter 2. You've got to update soon!
Anticipating! xx
Little Innocent Disasters? Hmm... Nice Headline.
I just wonder what's going to happen in chapter 2. You've got to update soon!
Anticipating! xx
7/13/2013 c1 Mr.Drizzy
Kids as the first chapter... Prologue.
Seems interesting thought. You got a lot of new running stories. Good luck ;)
Kids as the first chapter... Prologue.
Seems interesting thought. You got a lot of new running stories. Good luck ;)
7/13/2013 c1 Lullaby-Babii
Wow a Toddle point of view! She sounds so cute! Kyaah! _
But sympathy for her at the ending.
What will happen next?
Is something new going to happen?
WHAT HAPPENS! XD
Wow a Toddle point of view! She sounds so cute! Kyaah! _
But sympathy for her at the ending.
What will happen next?
Is something new going to happen?
WHAT HAPPENS! XD
7/13/2013 c1 XxKhloexX
New Story. New Change.
Wynter Scarlett Kaleah Irys. Pretty unique name there ;)
Wow reading toddle point of view is kind of different to other fanfics and also starting it off in the OC POV.
Got to give ya credit babe with all of the new stories. Especially with the new big job. Congrats! xx
New Story. New Change.
Wynter Scarlett Kaleah Irys. Pretty unique name there ;)
Wow reading toddle point of view is kind of different to other fanfics and also starting it off in the OC POV.
Got to give ya credit babe with all of the new stories. Especially with the new big job. Congrats! xx