for An Education7/28/2013 c1 
54ChocolateTeapot
This is nicely written, although the dialogue doesn't feel quite right to me. I'm not quite sure how to describe it, but it feels a little overloaded.
One typo: “your a true Gryffindor” I think that should be “you're”?
I like the beginning.
54ChocolateTeapotThis is nicely written, although the dialogue doesn't feel quite right to me. I'm not quite sure how to describe it, but it feels a little overloaded.
One typo: “your a true Gryffindor” I think that should be “you're”?
I like the beginning.
7/14/2013 c1 30bravenclawesome
I would have reviewed all the stuff you've been posting these days, but I'm too busy doing nothing due to the fact that it's summer!
I see your writing style hasn't changed. I still think you write a little bit like a news reporter but there was some good insight into Hermione's thoughts, if not emotions.
I'll post for Candy Floss when I have time, I think what you call 'update stress' is catching up with me again!
30bravenclawesomeI would have reviewed all the stuff you've been posting these days, but I'm too busy doing nothing due to the fact that it's summer!
I see your writing style hasn't changed. I still think you write a little bit like a news reporter but there was some good insight into Hermione's thoughts, if not emotions.
I'll post for Candy Floss when I have time, I think what you call 'update stress' is catching up with me again!