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12/8/2015 c1 20OverLord Wang-Yu
This Is Interesting. I Hope That You Continue This. But What About Adding Misao Into The Mix As Well?

GOOD LUCK!
8/5/2015 c1 He Who Seeks The Joys in Life
please continue this for the love of all that is sweet and innocent please continue this!
6/1/2015 c1 Guest
Write more
9/13/2014 c1 jgo
You other people should just shut up about the grammar mistakes I didn't even notice other the fact that its a good story keep up the good work
7/25/2014 c1 redwolf23456
Great story so far
6/18/2014 c1 Lisa
You need serious help with a little thing called grammar. Also, don't put author's notes in the middle of a story. It disrupts the flow of the story and is massively annoying to readers.
5/15/2014 c1 ShadowBloodedge9396
Please please please continue this! This looks so promising!
Also, assuming beta readers help fix up grammar and spelling errors and all, can I be your beta reader? So it's easier for others to read?
3/11/2014 c1 thatonereviewer
i forgot aya my bad
3/11/2014 c1 thatonereviewer
So it's romance maybe narutoxellenxviola? Maybe? just thought it would be good
1/22/2014 c1 1The Bag of Holding
Someone who knows how to write please take this up.
1/19/2014 c1 Tyler
i would really love to see what u do with this story. a briliant (sorry not a strong speller) idea that holds a lot of potential that i would love to see...errr read. please continue this story to many good ideas have just stopped.
12/8/2013 c1 genjuki
continues the story please TTTTTTTT_TTTTTTTTT
10/20/2013 c1 2Sevvus
i think this could be interesting..you should make more! :D
9/3/2013 c1 xavex
Nice beginning I hope you make more
8/22/2013 c1 Guest
i would really like to see this continue i am already hooked on this story! Such a brilliant idea!
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