7/23/2013 c8 1Faraway-R
Mmmm. Can I have some more Fate Breaker please? Morgan and Merlin too!
And prepare for some other requests once I reread this one! ;)
Mmmm. Can I have some more Fate Breaker please? Morgan and Merlin too!
And prepare for some other requests once I reread this one! ;)
7/23/2013 c8 Ranmaleopard
this is awesome i cant wait to see what this would look like as a full fanfic please continue!
this is awesome i cant wait to see what this would look like as a full fanfic please continue!
7/23/2013 c9 Faraway-R
Oh don't be like that. Hogwarts isn't doomed! It's just... going to experience an overhaul.
Oh don't be like that. Hogwarts isn't doomed! It's just... going to experience an overhaul.
7/23/2013 c8 10Wonderbee31
Interesting, and will be curious to think of the further role Harry could play and knocking things off kilter.
Interesting, and will be curious to think of the further role Harry could play and knocking things off kilter.
7/23/2013 c9 1Akk21
Hmm... there's a lot of potential here, one bit that bugs me is that Harry is a little too close to his canon self in both personality and skill in the little that you have shown of him, the chapter being more or less from phoebe's point of view and all. Harry would need a healthy dose of ambition and skill/power to make things work, or an excuse for why he doesn't have them *cough* dumble *cough*
HPverse has merlin as a slytherin student, and Morgana, while unknown if she ever attended, could turn into a bird that might as well have been a raven, it doth tickle my funny bone to see the new merlin with the ravens and the new morgana with the snakes.
Hmm... there's a lot of potential here, one bit that bugs me is that Harry is a little too close to his canon self in both personality and skill in the little that you have shown of him, the chapter being more or less from phoebe's point of view and all. Harry would need a healthy dose of ambition and skill/power to make things work, or an excuse for why he doesn't have them *cough* dumble *cough*
HPverse has merlin as a slytherin student, and Morgana, while unknown if she ever attended, could turn into a bird that might as well have been a raven, it doth tickle my funny bone to see the new merlin with the ravens and the new morgana with the snakes.
7/23/2013 c9 8Plunny.Empress
Nice. I love the mottos. I truly look forward to what else you come up with. Ravenclaws; intellectual badass. Slytherins; devious spinsters. Couldn't think of anything better for the Snakes... Oh well... Please keep writing!
Nice. I love the mottos. I truly look forward to what else you come up with. Ravenclaws; intellectual badass. Slytherins; devious spinsters. Couldn't think of anything better for the Snakes... Oh well... Please keep writing!
7/23/2013 c8 3NymphOfSky
I love this story. Please post more chapters. Also I agree with the whole never got the 'life is precious' speech.
I love this story. Please post more chapters. Also I agree with the whole never got the 'life is precious' speech.
7/22/2013 c8 3Reishin Amara
once again...highly interested...hell,worshipping this one of those where harry says screw the has magic.
once again...highly interested...hell,worshipping this one of those where harry says screw the has magic.
7/22/2013 c7 Guest
love this one hope you expand this crossover
love this one hope you expand this crossover
7/22/2013 c8 Kyubi9
Hi Ya! Kyubi9 here saying that I really like Fate Breaker so far and hope you continue it,
Well That's All SEE YA!
Hi Ya! Kyubi9 here saying that I really like Fate Breaker so far and hope you continue it,
Well That's All SEE YA!
7/22/2013 c8 Guest
Oooh, I really like this one! The idea of Harry and Lancer working together like that is awesome.
Oooh, I really like this one! The idea of Harry and Lancer working together like that is awesome.
7/22/2013 c8 8Plunny.Empress
XD I love the very last bit with the DiD!Ginny. XD Nicely written and I like this one a lot. Seems very interesting. I look forward to what else you come up with. Nice title by the way.
XD I love the very last bit with the DiD!Ginny. XD Nicely written and I like this one a lot. Seems very interesting. I look forward to what else you come up with. Nice title by the way.
7/22/2013 c8 38Vixen Uchiha
what is this chapter crossed with? I like it and hope you turn it into a full time story
what is this chapter crossed with? I like it and hope you turn it into a full time story