for Short Story Drabbles8/15/2013 c23 
2Kaless
muhahaha! Excellent! Gimmie more.
LOL. Don't leave me hanging, what happens next?
Does Hizashi stay in Konaha? What about Hiroto/Harry?
2Kalessmuhahaha! Excellent! Gimmie more.
LOL. Don't leave me hanging, what happens next?
Does Hizashi stay in Konaha? What about Hiroto/Harry?
8/15/2013 c23 lily
OH, me likes this one. More please.
OH, me likes this one. More please.
8/15/2013 c23 Liedral
hahahaaaa.. I get it... it's just that Kumo is one of the big 5 villages, i didn't expect them to be fooled for long. especially with spying activities
hahahaaaa.. I get it... it's just that Kumo is one of the big 5 villages, i didn't expect them to be fooled for long. especially with spying activities
8/15/2013 c23 AngelHime138
Hi,
I really like this. Please can you make Fate in the Clouds more than a drabble. It really is a good and interesting read.
Hi,
I really like this. Please can you make Fate in the Clouds more than a drabble. It really is a good and interesting read.
8/15/2013 c23 Whatwasthatnoise
One note here; The Hyuga you have persistantly called Hiashi is actually called Hizashi. The lack of name differentiation is rather confusing.
One note here; The Hyuga you have persistantly called Hiashi is actually called Hizashi. The lack of name differentiation is rather confusing.
8/15/2013 c23 24Yeziel Moore
Hello! First, I love most of your stories (the rest I don't follow the fandom, xD)
About this one specifically, I really like it! :) But I'm confused about a (tiny) detail. Wasn't Hiashi the Clan Head and Hizashi his twin brother who was in the Branch Family? I know the difference is a single letter but it threw me off a bit.
Or maybe you did it on purpose and so, would you mind explaining? Thanks!
24Yeziel MooreHello! First, I love most of your stories (the rest I don't follow the fandom, xD)
About this one specifically, I really like it! :) But I'm confused about a (tiny) detail. Wasn't Hiashi the Clan Head and Hizashi his twin brother who was in the Branch Family? I know the difference is a single letter but it threw me off a bit.
Or maybe you did it on purpose and so, would you mind explaining? Thanks!
8/15/2013 c23 1Lady Nyshah
Oh please please please continue this story! This is one of my favorite Harry Potter Naruto stories so far.
1Lady NyshahOh please please please continue this story! This is one of my favorite Harry Potter Naruto stories so far.
8/15/2013 c23 Moon Wolf 96
My apologies for wondering. Have you given any thought to posting a synopsis of the new/mini stories?
My apologies for wondering. Have you given any thought to posting a synopsis of the new/mini stories?
8/15/2013 c23 1astrakage
I would love to see you do a full story about this! I about laughed myself sick imagining the chaos that would happen!
1astrakageI would love to see you do a full story about this! I about laughed myself sick imagining the chaos that would happen!
8/15/2013 c23 2history
I really love this one story ( more that the other). So thank you for updating so quicly! I lov how happy hiroto is. Why do you choose Hiroto as name (sorry if you said it in an author note, i don't read them)
2historyI really love this one story ( more that the other). So thank you for updating so quicly! I lov how happy hiroto is. Why do you choose Hiroto as name (sorry if you said it in an author note, i don't read them)
8/15/2013 c22 2Kaless
LOL! OMG, please .please, please, make "Fate in the Clouds" more than a drabble.
It's the perfect set up
2KalessLOL! OMG, please .please, please, make "Fate in the Clouds" more than a drabble.
It's the perfect set up
8/15/2013 c22 3MWkillkenny84
... BWHAHHAHAHAHAH!
Kumo!Harry is new, and so Survived!Hisashi.
CONTINUE IT!
Vote: 10
3MWkillkenny84... BWHAHHAHAHAHAH!
Kumo!Harry is new, and so Survived!Hisashi.
CONTINUE IT!
Vote: 10