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6/10/2016 c2 7FoundingRaiderChrona
1. Yes! Two of the many fandoms I love in one story!
2. I like how you got the personalities of everyone!
3. While I like how the direction the story looks to be going, I think that if you can be a little more descriptive of what's happening and of the surroundings, the story will be even better. It'll help a whole lot when you add any fights scenes and the such, if you are that is.

And considering this has Fairy Tail in it, it probably will. I look forward to the next chapter!
10/27/2013 c2 12Princess Unikitty
that was pretty good. though the constant interruption of the story by footnotes was a bit annoying.
7/15/2013 c1 Princess Unikitty
looks interesting.
7/15/2013 c1 4Four Dimensional
If you add more within one chapter, it will be better. I promise.

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