
6/10/2016 c2
7FoundingRaiderChrona
1. Yes! Two of the many fandoms I love in one story!
2. I like how you got the personalities of everyone!
3. While I like how the direction the story looks to be going, I think that if you can be a little more descriptive of what's happening and of the surroundings, the story will be even better. It'll help a whole lot when you add any fights scenes and the such, if you are that is.
And considering this has Fairy Tail in it, it probably will. I look forward to the next chapter!

1. Yes! Two of the many fandoms I love in one story!
2. I like how you got the personalities of everyone!
3. While I like how the direction the story looks to be going, I think that if you can be a little more descriptive of what's happening and of the surroundings, the story will be even better. It'll help a whole lot when you add any fights scenes and the such, if you are that is.
And considering this has Fairy Tail in it, it probably will. I look forward to the next chapter!
10/27/2013 c2
12Princess Unikitty
that was pretty good. though the constant interruption of the story by footnotes was a bit annoying.

that was pretty good. though the constant interruption of the story by footnotes was a bit annoying.