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3/13/2016 c1 7Aileil
Thank you for this. You do a lovely job of showing the depth of thought and care that lies beneath the surface for all the men and a realistic job of having them give little indications of it to each other without voiceing the full extent of their reflections. It fits them quite well.
7/20/2014 c1 32LAGC
Wonderfully written. So honest yet completely true to their characters and behavior patterns.
6/19/2014 c1 Guest
This was lovely. Just the right tone and sentiment and never mushy because that wouldn't match them at all.
6/10/2014 c1 24MissEclipse
What a good idea for a story, which was very sensitively written. You weaved the original story into this scenario effortlessly. You've made me feel all warm and fluffy inside! Nice! :)
7/16/2013 c1 18The-Time-Travelling-Hippie
Superb, really excellent. I love how all of the Team's thoughts were different but all involved the same sort of things. I enjoyed this. Well done, Muchachi. :)
7/15/2013 c1 225Sophia Hawkins
Excellent, simply excellent covering everybody's side in this; much better than the initial thought the whole story was founded on, you did it justice alright.

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