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1/19/2019 c4 d oo t b o ye
awh hell i was really enjoyin this
4/21/2017 c3 3
im actually serious
4/21/2017 c2 3
bus ro ta
4/21/2017 c1 3
o noes
evul dragonborn
i hope the atronach eats his soul
1/20/2014 c3 Sazq
This is actually i really good story, very unique idea and I am enjoying it a lot, please keep up the great work!
9/5/2013 c3 3Darth-Malak
Loved the Atronach plain sounded awesome!
9/5/2013 c1 Darth-Malak
Great story so far! I am really interested and lovin' the atronach!

Thanx soooi much for the advice I was playing non stop haha! I'm by the part after you kill the 'emperor...
8/30/2013 c3 12Princess Unikitty
hmm. very compelling chapter, though the use of bold got a bit annoying.
8/30/2013 c3 18MissFabulous09
Sweet! A new chapter! And a good one at that, your writing is pretty good and I am growing fond of it. I like how you put bits of Sana's past in there, it gives the story more depth, I loved it! I can't wait to find out more about Sana:)
8/30/2013 c3 11WaddlesThePenguin
I write long enough chapters! This chapter seemed around the same length as the other. I don't think you needed to put she and her in bold. Still, amazing stories and ideas, I'm hooked. I loved the flashback and the idea of the scrolls
8/11/2013 c2 DarkChieftain
I like this. There should definitely be more stories featuring flame atronachs.
7/21/2013 c2 12Princess Unikitty
another great chapter. i like how you've developed your characters, though there is definitely a lot more telling than showing. there shouldn't be. also i recommend using double line breaks instead of single ones
7/21/2013 c1 charlie
only black soul gems can hold the souls of men you know, not grand ones
7/21/2013 c2 18MissFabulous09
Yay! Another chapter! I liked the atronach's personality, but the dialogue was a bit hard to follow, but not too bad. The alternate escape route was nice, and Raolf's magicical secret was a nice twist, are you am I g to follow the Skyrim quest line though? Or branch out and do your own thing? Either way, I liked it and I hope you post again soon:)
7/21/2013 c2 11WaddlesThePenguin
This is a great story but the chapters are a little short. I like the characters and their escape explanations. 'A dragon attacked and I escaped, you know, the usual.' LOL
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