for If Andy Knew2/21/2014 c3 emily.strachan1
Name: Saphire Starshine
Age: 17
Clothes: off the shoulder shirt with mini skirt under it
Hair: platinum blonde
Eyes: brown
Skin: sun kissed
Personality: shy around new people, hyper, nice,
Name: Saphire Starshine
Age: 17
Clothes: off the shoulder shirt with mini skirt under it
Hair: platinum blonde
Eyes: brown
Skin: sun kissed
Personality: shy around new people, hyper, nice,
10/16/2013 c4 Ratchet 2275
thats a great start like when mr potato head comes to life maybe he doesn't want this new life and walks off. maybe
thats a great start like when mr potato head comes to life maybe he doesn't want this new life and walks off. maybe
10/9/2013 c3 ratchet2257
hey can i please use ur idea i would change it and i would mention u giving me the idea
hey can i please use ur idea i would change it and i would mention u giving me the idea
8/11/2013 c2 
11Witch Knight Daisy
Ok, I've read your story, and I agree with the first reviewer: You need to make your chapters longer (at least 1,000 words). Otherwise, it's not considered a chapter. This story isn't bad for a beginning writer, but you're going to need more meat to it if you want it to attract readers.
11Witch Knight DaisyOk, I've read your story, and I agree with the first reviewer: You need to make your chapters longer (at least 1,000 words). Otherwise, it's not considered a chapter. This story isn't bad for a beginning writer, but you're going to need more meat to it if you want it to attract readers.
7/17/2013 c1 TruePrincess001
No, i think you should go with your idea. It is YOUR story after all. You can do it any way you'd like
No, i think you should go with your idea. It is YOUR story after all. You can do it any way you'd like
7/17/2013 c1 28brothermine
okay now this is a really interesting idea i'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this make the chaps a little longer and i'll be happy interested to see where this goes!
28brothermineokay now this is a really interesting idea i'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this make the chaps a little longer and i'll be happy interested to see where this goes!