
9/24/2016 c1 Hallowcrearor475
So sweeeet and saaad!
So sweeeet and saaad!
6/1/2015 c1
5Kifo Sotri
This was a very entertaining read, and my only complaint would be the lack of a sequel or second chapter. You did a good job portraying these two, and I would hope we can see more from you in the future.

This was a very entertaining read, and my only complaint would be the lack of a sequel or second chapter. You did a good job portraying these two, and I would hope we can see more from you in the future.
11/28/2014 c1 darkstar
Sad but I like it
Sad but I like it
11/6/2014 c1 Shirley
Would love a second chapter showing the aftermath.
Would love a second chapter showing the aftermath.
10/30/2013 c1
1lovleydarkness
Please please please write another chapter. Please! This was so beautiful, and so lovely, but at same time it hurt so much to read. I love it!

Please please please write another chapter. Please! This was so beautiful, and so lovely, but at same time it hurt so much to read. I love it!
9/24/2013 c1 Iruka
WELL IT DOES APPEAR THAT YOU ARE AN ASS. Please God continue this, this story would become so incredibly popular (or even more so, I don't know your views) if you kept going, so please just do us all a favor and continue writing this wonderfully amazing story, even if it's only a second chapter.
WELL IT DOES APPEAR THAT YOU ARE AN ASS. Please God continue this, this story would become so incredibly popular (or even more so, I don't know your views) if you kept going, so please just do us all a favor and continue writing this wonderfully amazing story, even if it's only a second chapter.
8/19/2013 c1 Bonnie
Omg, you're awesome, I cried so hard. Please consider uploading a chapter with what happened that day! I would appreciate it so much3
Omg, you're awesome, I cried so hard. Please consider uploading a chapter with what happened that day! I would appreciate it so much3
7/29/2013 c1 Guest
Fantastic story, can you please put more chapters
Fantastic story, can you please put more chapters
7/29/2013 c1
22mimibeebee
OHHHH MY GOOOOSH THIS WAS SOOO GOOD AND SOOO INCHARACTER wow that was actually sad at the end i feel like this was canon thank u so much for writing this its amazing

OHHHH MY GOOOOSH THIS WAS SOOO GOOD AND SOOO INCHARACTER wow that was actually sad at the end i feel like this was canon thank u so much for writing this its amazing
7/25/2013 c1 ff
Sobs
Sobs