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1/20/2015 c1 33Arrow-chan3
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7/20/2013 c1 177Huinari
I feel as if it might have been better if you showed a bit more of Ceryn's helplessness/guilt at not having been there for him. I mean, it does look like she's blaming him for not having told her about it, but in that kind of situation she would have most likely felt some kind of survivor's guilt, or at fault for not having found out about it.

That being said, wonderful sequel. Glad to see it.

Thank you for the story!

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