for Fiore's Greatest12/16/2016 c1 Guest
This story is soooooo good don't you dare give up on it and if you want my opinion I say why don't you make them all popular and celebrities whene they grow up and make gray and natsu fight for lucy's love while dealing with paparazzi and rumours and these kind of things that would be awesome
This story is soooooo good don't you dare give up on it and if you want my opinion I say why don't you make them all popular and celebrities whene they grow up and make gray and natsu fight for lucy's love while dealing with paparazzi and rumours and these kind of things that would be awesome
12/16/2016 c1 Guest
You GOT to continue this awesome story and please don't make natsu and lucy siblings I want them to be befriends
You GOT to continue this awesome story and please don't make natsu and lucy siblings I want them to be befriends
10/2/2016 c1 Guest
damn this is so good you better update GOT IT
damn this is so good you better update GOT IT
9/22/2013 c1 
24Eva Dreaming
Woa Gray knows some language for a six year old... Also are Lucy and Natsu really siblings... Or close friends... Or family friends... I hope there not siblings...
24Eva DreamingWoa Gray knows some language for a six year old... Also are Lucy and Natsu really siblings... Or close friends... Or family friends... I hope there not siblings...
7/20/2013 c1 Itro
Gray is jealous! XD I bet Gray wants Lucy for himself as they keep doing things! XD Who knows? Natsu and Lucy like each other and Gray is the jealous guy! Gray steal Lucy and Natsu hate Gray now, then Gray gets punished and then Natsu and Lucy reunite! :3 I know it's out of the ordinary or original but get this straight if someone says that to me. I. DON'T. CARE. XD
Gray is jealous! XD I bet Gray wants Lucy for himself as they keep doing things! XD Who knows? Natsu and Lucy like each other and Gray is the jealous guy! Gray steal Lucy and Natsu hate Gray now, then Gray gets punished and then Natsu and Lucy reunite! :3 I know it's out of the ordinary or original but get this straight if someone says that to me. I. DON'T. CARE. XD
7/20/2013 c1 Guest
Love it! Keep it up!
Love it! Keep it up!
7/20/2013 c1 DB-Jayne73
hey rose another awesome start to another story! are natsu and lucy brothers and sisters or not? i really need to sign into fanfic i have an account but i havent signed in so now im a guest _ yehehe
DB
hey rose another awesome start to another story! are natsu and lucy brothers and sisters or not? i really need to sign into fanfic i have an account but i havent signed in so now im a guest _ yehehe
DB