
8/28/2013 c1
2the.mad.nimrod
An...interesting twist there. Seriously, I don't think I've ever seen an end-twist quite like that, and that is not a bad thing. This was pretty fun to read, and since I'm gonna start reading/watching Rosario Vampire in a bit, I think this might be a good example of what to expect.
Went a little quick, though. Maybe the next one you write could have a bit more detail? I'm kinda wondering WHAT wound he got that disabled him for two days.
Lookin forward to see what you write next.

An...interesting twist there. Seriously, I don't think I've ever seen an end-twist quite like that, and that is not a bad thing. This was pretty fun to read, and since I'm gonna start reading/watching Rosario Vampire in a bit, I think this might be a good example of what to expect.
Went a little quick, though. Maybe the next one you write could have a bit more detail? I'm kinda wondering WHAT wound he got that disabled him for two days.
Lookin forward to see what you write next.