for Ours8/20/2015 c1 
13OwlIs
This was a cute little one-shot! It's such a shame Prentiss quit on Criminal Minds - she was my favorite too! Hotch and Prentiss are so cute together!
13OwlIsThis was a cute little one-shot! It's such a shame Prentiss quit on Criminal Minds - she was my favorite too! Hotch and Prentiss are so cute together!
8/6/2014 c1 39Susie G
I really like this story. The dialogue is great, I think that you have depicted each character really well and brought out their personalities. I love the storyline and how they have this wonderful secret of being together. It seems to me like that would be very realistic to the show! Great job with this one! I really enjoyed it!
39Susie GI really like this story. The dialogue is great, I think that you have depicted each character really well and brought out their personalities. I love the storyline and how they have this wonderful secret of being together. It seems to me like that would be very realistic to the show! Great job with this one! I really enjoyed it!
7/20/2013 c1 23To Thine Own Self Be True101
English isn't your native language? You could've fooled me, your English is great! I like the story, I hope you continue!
23To Thine Own Self Be True101English isn't your native language? You could've fooled me, your English is great! I like the story, I hope you continue!
7/20/2013 c1 7princess007
I just drop a line to let you know how much i loke the idea but there are some improvements possible, i think. Maybe you can add some actions or feelings to the dialog and it was a little bit confusing that they always said "after this is over". what is over? Otherwise i hope you continue soon :))
7princess007I just drop a line to let you know how much i loke the idea but there are some improvements possible, i think. Maybe you can add some actions or feelings to the dialog and it was a little bit confusing that they always said "after this is over". what is over? Otherwise i hope you continue soon :))