for Bringing Memories8/9/2014 c1 
47Oriondruid
Regarding the previous guest review, Hermione often uses Ron's full christian name, especially when she is a bit annoyed with him and not always only then. The two are interchangeable.
In relation to the final not yet posted chapter of this tale, I have been absent from fan fiction for some time due to persaonal 'real life issues. But hope once again to pick up some of my overdue updates soon, now I am fitter and writing again. As yet I have only completed a couple of 'one shots' but hope to add to my multi chapters asap.
Many Blessings.
Oriondruid, (John).
47OriondruidRegarding the previous guest review, Hermione often uses Ron's full christian name, especially when she is a bit annoyed with him and not always only then. The two are interchangeable.
In relation to the final not yet posted chapter of this tale, I have been absent from fan fiction for some time due to persaonal 'real life issues. But hope once again to pick up some of my overdue updates soon, now I am fitter and writing again. As yet I have only completed a couple of 'one shots' but hope to add to my multi chapters asap.
Many Blessings.
Oriondruid, (John).
8/9/2014 c2 Guest
Ron! Not Ronald!
Ron! Not Ronald!
8/1/2013 c4 finchelromionelover
I really liked this chapter. You did a good job of incorporating magic in Australia
I really liked this chapter. You did a good job of incorporating magic in Australia
7/26/2013 c3 10Alyssa105
Very good story. It was really cute at the end, and I liked your creative ideas for reverse obliviation spells. Very nice.
Because I can sometimes be a grammar nazi, I just thought I would point out a few mistakes I found. I'm not trying to be annoying or anything; I just thought I would point these out.
"With Hermione held strongly round HER (I think it should have been 'his')waist, needing his support and reassurance..."
"We just need to speak YOURSELF (I think it should have been 'to yourself' or 'with yourself') and your husband..."
"She bustled out of the front room and went to the rear door OF]F (hehe I don't think the right bracket and the extra F should have been there,) the house..."
"She placed these on the dining table and invited 'MONICA AND WENDELL (think you forgot the last apostrophe after 'Wendell') to take a look at them, which they duly began to do..."
And finally:
"As she did so her parents became AS statues (It might be a bit better saying 'as still as statues'..."
Again, I am not trying to be annoying, I just thought you might appreciate it if someone pointed those little things out.
Best Regards:
Alyssa
10Alyssa105Very good story. It was really cute at the end, and I liked your creative ideas for reverse obliviation spells. Very nice.
Because I can sometimes be a grammar nazi, I just thought I would point out a few mistakes I found. I'm not trying to be annoying or anything; I just thought I would point these out.
"With Hermione held strongly round HER (I think it should have been 'his')waist, needing his support and reassurance..."
"We just need to speak YOURSELF (I think it should have been 'to yourself' or 'with yourself') and your husband..."
"She bustled out of the front room and went to the rear door OF]F (hehe I don't think the right bracket and the extra F should have been there,) the house..."
"She placed these on the dining table and invited 'MONICA AND WENDELL (think you forgot the last apostrophe after 'Wendell') to take a look at them, which they duly began to do..."
And finally:
"As she did so her parents became AS statues (It might be a bit better saying 'as still as statues'..."
Again, I am not trying to be annoying, I just thought you might appreciate it if someone pointed those little things out.
Best Regards:
Alyssa
7/25/2013 c3 Laurel
I really did not like this story. I feel like neither Ron nor hermione stuck to their true character at all. Hermione and Ron were both too emotional, and everybody in the story was stiff and used language that was way too profesional. It sounded like you were just trying to find big words for everything and most times that makes for a confusing read and makes it sound much to stiff and professional to be enjoyable
I really did not like this story. I feel like neither Ron nor hermione stuck to their true character at all. Hermione and Ron were both too emotional, and everybody in the story was stiff and used language that was way too profesional. It sounded like you were just trying to find big words for everything and most times that makes for a confusing read and makes it sound much to stiff and professional to be enjoyable
7/20/2013 c1 30bravenclawesome
I think this was very well written but the quote marks for some words and phrases really annoyed me - you didn't have to put so many in when you meant what you said. I am still working on The Surprise, if you remember :)
30bravenclawesomeI think this was very well written but the quote marks for some words and phrases really annoyed me - you didn't have to put so many in when you meant what you said. I am still working on The Surprise, if you remember :)
7/20/2013 c1 10Alyssa105
Hehehe. I like this story so far. I like the way you explain little things about what is going on. I think you had Ron very in character; he would be the person to deny that he was ever afraid of something once he saw that it worked. And if the plane had crashed, he would have said "I told you so." Lol too funny.
10Alyssa105Hehehe. I like this story so far. I like the way you explain little things about what is going on. I think you had Ron very in character; he would be the person to deny that he was ever afraid of something once he saw that it worked. And if the plane had crashed, he would have said "I told you so." Lol too funny.