
2/18/2018 c1 Nami
It was cute great job.
It was cute great job.
10/17/2017 c1 MeowMeowCrazyMe
I love this!
I love this!
7/25/2017 c1 catspats31
The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:
Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
You should remove all elements related to the reader like "_" and replace them all with a canon character or original character. Switch to the first person or third person point of view. Alternatively, you can move it to a site where it's allowed like Archive Of Our Own.
The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:
Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
You should remove all elements related to the reader like "_" and replace them all with a canon character or original character. Switch to the first person or third person point of view. Alternatively, you can move it to a site where it's allowed like Archive Of Our Own.
4/8/2017 c1 Ada
Hehe
Hehe
2/27/2017 c1 layla
omg soooo adorable "we have all night to practise" I fricken wish
omg soooo adorable "we have all night to practise" I fricken wish
12/2/2016 c1 Emii
Aw cute I love it please I would be amazed and so happy if you did
Aw cute I love it please I would be amazed and so happy if you did
11/16/2016 c1 Miriam Or Doll
AWESOME!
AWESOME!
10/16/2016 c1 Adreana
Yes! Yes! *fangirls*
Yes! Yes! *fangirls*
9/19/2016 c1 Nico Stone
A... little mushy for a alois x reader
A... little mushy for a alois x reader
6/23/2016 c1 Jay
Love this!️️️️️
Love this!️️️️️
5/22/2016 c1 lydea
OMG OMG OMG! so good i love this OMG OMG OMG! BEST THING EVER
OMG OMG OMG! so good i love this OMG OMG OMG! BEST THING EVER
2/14/2016 c1 Guest
Cute. I liked it very much.
Cute. I liked it very much.
1/16/2016 c1 Guest
... 3333
... 3333
11/28/2015 c1 Leda Muir
I know that I've problaly reviewed this like 20 times but this story is so amazing. I love Alois so much {who wouldn't} and this story makes me just want to hug him! You are an excellent writer. Keep writing and follow your dreams!
-TheLedaBunny
I know that I've problaly reviewed this like 20 times but this story is so amazing. I love Alois so much {who wouldn't} and this story makes me just want to hug him! You are an excellent writer. Keep writing and follow your dreams!
-TheLedaBunny
10/4/2015 c1 Silver Reaper
That was good can you please continue it?
That was good can you please continue it?