for Death Korps of Justice4/19 c48 
3Fernix13
half of this story was honestly annoying, but im glad i powered through it.
as to the main plot, I dont think its overgrown and convoluted, and i have never even watched DC.
Numbers wise, once the current forces sieging LA are defeated, and the area is secured, it can become a reliable staging ground for a major counter-attack in california and nevada. the are significant military installations in the area, that can provide war material as well.
once those are relatively under control, survivors should be able to scrounge up SOME proper air support and restore local control.
next in line will logistics and infrastructure, as well as command and control.
3Fernix13half of this story was honestly annoying, but im glad i powered through it.
as to the main plot, I dont think its overgrown and convoluted, and i have never even watched DC.
Numbers wise, once the current forces sieging LA are defeated, and the area is secured, it can become a reliable staging ground for a major counter-attack in california and nevada. the are significant military installations in the area, that can provide war material as well.
once those are relatively under control, survivors should be able to scrounge up SOME proper air support and restore local control.
next in line will logistics and infrastructure, as well as command and control.
4/13 c1 3Trux-Killer
And ignore Slither21, they don’t know what they’re talking about. Besides if they aint into it, dont hate it. I swear, its like someone verbally hating an ice cream flavor that most people like. Thats Slither21 right there
3Trux-KillerAnd ignore Slither21, they don’t know what they’re talking about. Besides if they aint into it, dont hate it. I swear, its like someone verbally hating an ice cream flavor that most people like. Thats Slither21 right there
4/12 c48 Trux-Killer
Ohhhh man… Joker really is enjoying the chaos. I feel liek even if the souls or innocent people were freed from thsi, i think they would beg to be killed because of how severe this whole thing is going on across the whole world… and with Megan now having her mind break… that aint good… Krieg I hope you can fix this….
Also Author, its great to see you back! Ngl, while i may not be familiar with the games or lore of it (since its long af lol). It makes me happy to see that this story tackles the heroes morality and codes on what to do when there is an evil you can’t truly stop…
Ohhhh man… Joker really is enjoying the chaos. I feel liek even if the souls or innocent people were freed from thsi, i think they would beg to be killed because of how severe this whole thing is going on across the whole world… and with Megan now having her mind break… that aint good… Krieg I hope you can fix this….
Also Author, its great to see you back! Ngl, while i may not be familiar with the games or lore of it (since its long af lol). It makes me happy to see that this story tackles the heroes morality and codes on what to do when there is an evil you can’t truly stop…
4/10 c17 Slither21
Okay very clearly this fic isnt for me.
Since youve shoehorned chaos in all of a sudden.
Its so ass
Okay very clearly this fic isnt for me.
Since youve shoehorned chaos in all of a sudden.
Its so ass
4/10 c15 Slither21
Didnt like this dream arc. It felt like just a reason to force them to experience some of warhammer.
Genuinely had to take a break form the chapter because of the shitty meme that just didnt belong at al
Oh ffs. Now youve forced chaos into DC. Way to make the fic boring and predictable. It ruins every WH xover fic
Didnt like this dream arc. It felt like just a reason to force them to experience some of warhammer.
Genuinely had to take a break form the chapter because of the shitty meme that just didnt belong at al
Oh ffs. Now youve forced chaos into DC. Way to make the fic boring and predictable. It ruins every WH xover fic
4/6 c48 kingbean777205
Excellent work lad! I look forward to Krieg reuniting with Rachel, hopefully its a peaceful one, he seemed to enjoy her company and could use someone to play chess with!
Also this hand, I wonder if our boy will take that trooper under his wing, he's young sure, but even in the face of fear, he still tried and did his damnedest to save Krieg and fight to the bitter end.
Out of curiosity, but what's Luther and superman up to? Been a while since we seen them, and on to the siege itself, what happened to the zoo animals? I wouldn't put it out of the question if those wretched cultist butchered them too, or try to turn them into mutated war beasts. If not, I can see Krieg taking a pragmatic route of conscripting the Elephants to haul supplies, that way fuel can be saved for vehicles on the frontlines and for use in flamers.
Keep up the good work lad!
Excellent work lad! I look forward to Krieg reuniting with Rachel, hopefully its a peaceful one, he seemed to enjoy her company and could use someone to play chess with!
Also this hand, I wonder if our boy will take that trooper under his wing, he's young sure, but even in the face of fear, he still tried and did his damnedest to save Krieg and fight to the bitter end.
Out of curiosity, but what's Luther and superman up to? Been a while since we seen them, and on to the siege itself, what happened to the zoo animals? I wouldn't put it out of the question if those wretched cultist butchered them too, or try to turn them into mutated war beasts. If not, I can see Krieg taking a pragmatic route of conscripting the Elephants to haul supplies, that way fuel can be saved for vehicles on the frontlines and for use in flamers.
Keep up the good work lad!
3/28 c41 Salko
Thank God they don't have a space ship even a simple corvette can vaporize the city in... seconds
Thank God they don't have a space ship even a simple corvette can vaporize the city in... seconds
3/27 c14 Salko
Changer of Ways daemon definitely
Krone more violent also dislike deceptions
Slaneesh Carnal or well excess in skill is quite rare.
Grandpa uhhh is Granpa
Changer of Ways daemon definitely
Krone more violent also dislike deceptions
Slaneesh Carnal or well excess in skill is quite rare.
Grandpa uhhh is Granpa
3/27 c2 Salko
Scrap code is basicly a demonic virus wonder if that lasgun cam through or it was warded enough
Scrap code is basicly a demonic virus wonder if that lasgun cam through or it was warded enough