
10/19/2013 c4 Celis
Truly an enjoyable fic with a good OC (Almost unheard of!).
Will be interesting to see how this is gonna play out, deathstroke as a possible mentor?
Perhaps an vigilante like the red hood, you know, not minding the blood.
Ahh it could go in any way possible!
Hope you update soon :)
Truly an enjoyable fic with a good OC (Almost unheard of!).
Will be interesting to see how this is gonna play out, deathstroke as a possible mentor?
Perhaps an vigilante like the red hood, you know, not minding the blood.
Ahh it could go in any way possible!
Hope you update soon :)
10/17/2013 c4
9undead3
OK I'm really liking this and jumped into this story expecting something bad. Instead you're not using some Mary Sue marine or super inquisitor but a simple krieg boy in a unique situation. And the rest of the story flows very well. Instance like/fav

OK I'm really liking this and jumped into this story expecting something bad. Instead you're not using some Mary Sue marine or super inquisitor but a simple krieg boy in a unique situation. And the rest of the story flows very well. Instance like/fav
10/8/2013 c4
2Tech Jammer
This is so epic...
Dammnit, Everyone and by extensio Krieg in Warhammer is just so hardcore; gruesome in the methods, but still hardcore and necessary when they are forced to face what the Imperium has to deal with every single day.
Plz, Continue I cant get enough
Sincerely,
Tech Jammer

This is so epic...
Dammnit, Everyone and by extensio Krieg in Warhammer is just so hardcore; gruesome in the methods, but still hardcore and necessary when they are forced to face what the Imperium has to deal with every single day.
Plz, Continue I cant get enough
Sincerely,
Tech Jammer
9/30/2013 c1 jess
do continue with this, it was a riviting read.
do continue with this, it was a riviting read.
9/23/2013 c4 LordSamiel
awesome story.
Nice to see that you kept his actions and thoughts realistic. The culture shock is hilarious, especially his opinions, which make perfect sense in the 41 milllenium but not really in DC comics :P
awesome story.
Nice to see that you kept his actions and thoughts realistic. The culture shock is hilarious, especially his opinions, which make perfect sense in the 41 milllenium but not really in DC comics :P
9/20/2013 c4 Guest
I like this chapter and a thanks for keeping the ruthless intelligent 40k personality that is loyal to the Imperium yet sees when he is outmatched...
for now HAAAAAAA
I like this chapter and a thanks for keeping the ruthless intelligent 40k personality that is loyal to the Imperium yet sees when he is outmatched...
for now HAAAAAAA
9/20/2013 c4
3Lost Guy
after such a long wait this was beautiful to read. dear Emperor how I relish this day.

after such a long wait this was beautiful to read. dear Emperor how I relish this day.
9/20/2013 c4 JagSebbe
Fantastic! I hope that in the long run, Keled's attitude is a bit contagious and leads to the leage being a bit more ruthless and final in their dealings with crime.
Fantastic! I hope that in the long run, Keled's attitude is a bit contagious and leads to the leage being a bit more ruthless and final in their dealings with crime.