
6/11 c1 Jonnyboy218
This is probably the best story I’ve ever read. I’ve been reading it for years, but it’s been a while since I last caught up. Honestly, I can’t remember the canon as well as I remember this, so it’s most my head canon at this point. 10/10 going to reread the entire thing so excited about the rewrite.
This is probably the best story I’ve ever read. I’ve been reading it for years, but it’s been a while since I last caught up. Honestly, I can’t remember the canon as well as I remember this, so it’s most my head canon at this point. 10/10 going to reread the entire thing so excited about the rewrite.
4/26 c134 Bradleybakes
Well written detailed chapter as we have come to expect and as you said clearing the way for the big event no one will every know about or maybe... Another baby... relationships coming out into the open finally... well nearly... Hopefully fanfiction does not go wrong again on the next upload.
Well written detailed chapter as we have come to expect and as you said clearing the way for the big event no one will every know about or maybe... Another baby... relationships coming out into the open finally... well nearly... Hopefully fanfiction does not go wrong again on the next upload.
4/22 c133
5ggtnh449
This is my first time writing a review for someone. It's a great story. The first time I read it was many years ago, when it was probably 600 thousand words. Since then, I've read it more than once. The author wishes you all the best and I'm sorry for the bad English, it's not my language.

This is my first time writing a review for someone. It's a great story. The first time I read it was many years ago, when it was probably 600 thousand words. Since then, I've read it more than once. The author wishes you all the best and I'm sorry for the bad English, it's not my language.
4/21 c134
3Gregory Graham
was down when I saw this update two days ago, so I couldn't read and comment until today sorry.
Now I know that in your other story you have both perseus and percy, however, as the chapters advance, I find Perseus an extremely unnecessary character. Even as the chapters continue, I honestly, thought that it would be for the best for both Harmony and Perseus to never hook up, leaving it only as a possibility between Perseus and Artemis on the rare occasion Harmony chooses to return to that form. It would honestly be for the better that sexually frustrated he meets up with Annabeth and cucks Nico leaving Percy to clean up the mess resulting in them disappearing which is what we saw in Thalia view in the future. But I truly don't like the, he's the same just with a different part of your attitude thing, because the gods aspects can be hugely different between the two pantheons.
In all honesty though, I never thought that Percy should've gotten a roman aspect, since for starters he is now a Titan and we've seen gods that belong to only one pantheon before i.e. Enyo, Bellona & Terminus and consequently it should've been the same for Percy. But alas now that he does, I don't exactly like the whole, "I am also Percy, hence I have a right to sleep with Harmony" thing going on. Also nor do I think that Artemis or Diana will tolerate such a blantant objectification of themselves, whilst Harmony does, it would make the other two completely out of character even with this change. Therefore I don't see him getting any action outside of Harmony, and I cannot see him being patient enough to make things work. Nor do I think he will truly accept Percy's better standing with the three of them, and hence I can see him sleeping with someone else after the resentment piles up resulting in him losing them very quickly.
Rant aside, Brilliant update and glad to see you're still writing.

was down when I saw this update two days ago, so I couldn't read and comment until today sorry.
Now I know that in your other story you have both perseus and percy, however, as the chapters advance, I find Perseus an extremely unnecessary character. Even as the chapters continue, I honestly, thought that it would be for the best for both Harmony and Perseus to never hook up, leaving it only as a possibility between Perseus and Artemis on the rare occasion Harmony chooses to return to that form. It would honestly be for the better that sexually frustrated he meets up with Annabeth and cucks Nico leaving Percy to clean up the mess resulting in them disappearing which is what we saw in Thalia view in the future. But I truly don't like the, he's the same just with a different part of your attitude thing, because the gods aspects can be hugely different between the two pantheons.
In all honesty though, I never thought that Percy should've gotten a roman aspect, since for starters he is now a Titan and we've seen gods that belong to only one pantheon before i.e. Enyo, Bellona & Terminus and consequently it should've been the same for Percy. But alas now that he does, I don't exactly like the whole, "I am also Percy, hence I have a right to sleep with Harmony" thing going on. Also nor do I think that Artemis or Diana will tolerate such a blantant objectification of themselves, whilst Harmony does, it would make the other two completely out of character even with this change. Therefore I don't see him getting any action outside of Harmony, and I cannot see him being patient enough to make things work. Nor do I think he will truly accept Percy's better standing with the three of them, and hence I can see him sleeping with someone else after the resentment piles up resulting in him losing them very quickly.
Rant aside, Brilliant update and glad to see you're still writing.
4/18 c134
3EgoRaptor
Really fun chapter to read, loved the dynamic between poseidon and Perseus in this, have also just thought, is it still like 2014 in this story? If so I hope they invest in bitcoin haha

Really fun chapter to read, loved the dynamic between poseidon and Perseus in this, have also just thought, is it still like 2014 in this story? If so I hope they invest in bitcoin haha
3/15 c1 Avid Reader
... it is in 1st person. What a disgusting amateur perspective, that still confuses me as to who, and how, it is so over represented amongst fanfiction. It is as though many people never read anything beyond books for children and fanfiction written by people who had only read books for children.
... it is in 1st person. What a disgusting amateur perspective, that still confuses me as to who, and how, it is so over represented amongst fanfiction. It is as though many people never read anything beyond books for children and fanfiction written by people who had only read books for children.
3/5 c63 Guest
Why did she use that bow? It has no point in the fucking story quite literally she uses mortal silver so she should be fine to use her.
Why did she use that bow? It has no point in the fucking story quite literally she uses mortal silver so she should be fine to use her.
3/4 c133 ShadowSaiyan666
Honestly, I just had the thought while reading this of "how are Lilith and Perseus going to recombine, she's been around for awhile and is kinda just her own person now..." and then you combined them this same chapter. Weird timing on my part. Anyway, thanks for the chapter, looks good.
Honestly, I just had the thought while reading this of "how are Lilith and Perseus going to recombine, she's been around for awhile and is kinda just her own person now..." and then you combined them this same chapter. Weird timing on my part. Anyway, thanks for the chapter, looks good.