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My thoughts are you are retarded in some way. You are fucking shit at writing.
My thoughts are you are retarded in some way. You are fucking shit at writing.
9/1/2013 c2 mljezfz
I like this story very much! It is very promising like with Alexis's, Lanie's, Kev's and Javi's, Gates's, Gina's and Meredith's and Jim's reactions! Hopefully to see new chapters soon!
I like this story very much! It is very promising like with Alexis's, Lanie's, Kev's and Javi's, Gates's, Gina's and Meredith's and Jim's reactions! Hopefully to see new chapters soon!
8/3/2013 c2 aussiecate
Oh, I think Kate's been hanging out with Rick too long, she's losing her the magical powers of poker face! That last line from Gates has to be all ways of bad too! Want more soon please ;)
Oh, I think Kate's been hanging out with Rick too long, she's losing her the magical powers of poker face! That last line from Gates has to be all ways of bad too! Want more soon please ;)
8/2/2013 c2 
41Ky03elk
oh kate's panic was hilarious! and the desperation reached fever pitch with the scarf, which was perfect as it led to the boys and gates, which completely left me on the floor, laughing my ass off! thanks
41Ky03elkoh kate's panic was hilarious! and the desperation reached fever pitch with the scarf, which was perfect as it led to the boys and gates, which completely left me on the floor, laughing my ass off! thanks
8/2/2013 c2 ZipIt
Such a fun chapter. Kate's hilarious and Gates reprimanding the boys.
Loved it!
Such a fun chapter. Kate's hilarious and Gates reprimanding the boys.
Loved it!
8/2/2013 c2 SeriouslyCarol
Hysterical, love it. Written so well, you can just visualize them acting exactly like this.
Hysterical, love it. Written so well, you can just visualize them acting exactly like this.
8/2/2013 c2 36Dana Keylits
Bahahaha! Oh, I love this! You guys are such teases! And, I adore a panicked Beckett. Very funny! Nice job! Thank you. ;-)
-Katy
36Dana KeylitsBahahaha! Oh, I love this! You guys are such teases! And, I adore a panicked Beckett. Very funny! Nice job! Thank you. ;-)
-Katy
8/2/2013 c2 16purplangel
And it starts off so funny - just like I expected: She, Kate Beckett, homicide detective, was going to kill him dead, and then a little bit more dead for good measure.
LMAO: Frankly, she didn't give him much in terms of life expectancy if on top of means and opportunity, he also provided her with motive.
Had to laugh over the boys stating that they got the pics and of course she's thinking of her body photos, lol.
she distinctly remembered he'd shown great dexterity as the deft fingers of one hand had started undoing her work while the other had been snapping pictures of her. (This is sooo Castle, girls)
And luv this description of Castle: No need to tempt the devil, that is, her sweet, loving, annoying boyfriend, any further.
That ending? Priceless
16purplangelAnd it starts off so funny - just like I expected: She, Kate Beckett, homicide detective, was going to kill him dead, and then a little bit more dead for good measure.
LMAO: Frankly, she didn't give him much in terms of life expectancy if on top of means and opportunity, he also provided her with motive.
Had to laugh over the boys stating that they got the pics and of course she's thinking of her body photos, lol.
she distinctly remembered he'd shown great dexterity as the deft fingers of one hand had started undoing her work while the other had been snapping pictures of her. (This is sooo Castle, girls)
And luv this description of Castle: No need to tempt the devil, that is, her sweet, loving, annoying boyfriend, any further.
That ending? Priceless
8/2/2013 c2 101Liv Wilder
Love it! You guys are doing an awesome job with this one, AND you posted Ch2 BEFORE my next birthday! YAY!
So many funny moments in this chapter. But this was the best image for my money:
"Castle had been bouncing up and down the bedroom, camera in hand, while she'd been standing on her bare legs, focused on buttoning up her shirt. She distinctly remembered he'd shown great dexterity as the deft fingers of one hand had started undoing her work while the other had been snapping pictures of her." All I could see was her white shirt from After The Storm, (Mmm, sexy!) and a rather overenthusiastic Castle.
Great writing. Looking forward to Ch3. And thank you again for my awesome gift! So pleased to see it'll remain my birthday until you are finished with this. :)
Liv
101Liv WilderLove it! You guys are doing an awesome job with this one, AND you posted Ch2 BEFORE my next birthday! YAY!
So many funny moments in this chapter. But this was the best image for my money:
"Castle had been bouncing up and down the bedroom, camera in hand, while she'd been standing on her bare legs, focused on buttoning up her shirt. She distinctly remembered he'd shown great dexterity as the deft fingers of one hand had started undoing her work while the other had been snapping pictures of her." All I could see was her white shirt from After The Storm, (Mmm, sexy!) and a rather overenthusiastic Castle.
Great writing. Looking forward to Ch3. And thank you again for my awesome gift! So pleased to see it'll remain my birthday until you are finished with this. :)
Liv
8/2/2013 c2 36InkyCoffee
OHMYGOSH GIRLS! THIS IS HILARIOUS! AND JUST THE PEFECTEST FLUFF THAT I NEEDED TO READ TONIGHT! YOU'RE BOTH SUPER GENIUSES, AND I'M GATHERING YOU BOTH UP IN MY ARMS RIGHT NOW FOR SMOOSHY CUDDLES!
All of it was BRILLIANT, but special kudos for:
"Frankly, she didn't give him much in terms of life expectancy if on top of means and opportunity, he also provided her with motive."
and
"Detective Ryan, Detective Esposito," the Captain boomed out. "That murder isn't going to solve itself; Go back to your desks and stop ogling Detective Beckett's chest."
Oblivious to the stupefaction painting itself on their features, Gates added, "Detective Beckett, if you want to press charges for lewd behavior, I'll be in my office."
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! YOU GIRLS ARE AMAZING!
-Lou
36InkyCoffeeOHMYGOSH GIRLS! THIS IS HILARIOUS! AND JUST THE PEFECTEST FLUFF THAT I NEEDED TO READ TONIGHT! YOU'RE BOTH SUPER GENIUSES, AND I'M GATHERING YOU BOTH UP IN MY ARMS RIGHT NOW FOR SMOOSHY CUDDLES!
All of it was BRILLIANT, but special kudos for:
"Frankly, she didn't give him much in terms of life expectancy if on top of means and opportunity, he also provided her with motive."
and
"Detective Ryan, Detective Esposito," the Captain boomed out. "That murder isn't going to solve itself; Go back to your desks and stop ogling Detective Beckett's chest."
Oblivious to the stupefaction painting itself on their features, Gates added, "Detective Beckett, if you want to press charges for lewd behavior, I'll be in my office."
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! YOU GIRLS ARE AMAZING!
-Lou
7/29/2013 c1 1msTGR
OMG this is terrific! Here I am, thinking - I should really read one of B's stories now - and THIS happens? TOO GOOD!
I love it, I love it, I love it! "If she was merciful, she would also kill him." This has got to be one of the best lines ever!
Can't wait to see what will transpire :)
1msTGROMG this is terrific! Here I am, thinking - I should really read one of B's stories now - and THIS happens? TOO GOOD!
I love it, I love it, I love it! "If she was merciful, she would also kill him." This has got to be one of the best lines ever!
Can't wait to see what will transpire :)
7/25/2013 c1 aussiecate
Only Rick Castle could be so adorable, bumbling and so infuriating all at the same time! Hilarious - more please!
Only Rick Castle could be so adorable, bumbling and so infuriating all at the same time! Hilarious - more please!