for The 8th member7/1/2015 c16 Anonymous3278
...it...it was a dream... *crawls under rock and dies* I didn't expect that... I love this story btw it has me up at 5:28 a.m and unable to sleep because I want to know what happens next!
...it...it was a dream... *crawls under rock and dies* I didn't expect that... I love this story btw it has me up at 5:28 a.m and unable to sleep because I want to know what happens next!
6/17/2014 c4 EpicDuck
Why is Sanji being so rude to Nami, and I'm sorry please don't make this offend you but May is getting really annoying.
Why is Sanji being so rude to Nami, and I'm sorry please don't make this offend you but May is getting really annoying.
6/17/2014 c34 
1RingerASCE
Finally they kiss! And lol Kaku walks in at an awkward moment. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! :)
1RingerASCEFinally they kiss! And lol Kaku walks in at an awkward moment. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! :)
3/23/2014 c33 RingerASCE
And we're on to Water 7! My absolute favorite arc! I can't wait to see what u do with it. :) great chapter, update soon! :)
And we're on to Water 7! My absolute favorite arc! I can't wait to see what u do with it. :) great chapter, update soon! :)
3/20/2014 c1 No one
Self-insert or Mary Sue? Either way this story is awful. Male character falls in love with her, but not any of the girls actually in the story? What's so special/different about your character from the others, like Nami, Robim, Perona, etc...and Lufy slightly OOC? My goodness, Luffy is smarter than that; after all, he knew about Boa Hancock's monumental unrequited love for him, he simply isn't interested in romance (he is however,very much a moodkiller). Nami working with Robin for something other than personal gain? I'm half waiting for her to either reveal or obtain Devil Fruit powers...I think this story would have been so much better if May and Sanji fell for each other. But that's just my opinion, feel free to ignore it, of course.
Self-insert or Mary Sue? Either way this story is awful. Male character falls in love with her, but not any of the girls actually in the story? What's so special/different about your character from the others, like Nami, Robim, Perona, etc...and Lufy slightly OOC? My goodness, Luffy is smarter than that; after all, he knew about Boa Hancock's monumental unrequited love for him, he simply isn't interested in romance (he is however,very much a moodkiller). Nami working with Robin for something other than personal gain? I'm half waiting for her to either reveal or obtain Devil Fruit powers...I think this story would have been so much better if May and Sanji fell for each other. But that's just my opinion, feel free to ignore it, of course.
2/10/2014 c32 1RingerASCE
I really liked thes past 2 chapters :) I'm very curious about th syth. Update soon! :)
1RingerASCEI really liked thes past 2 chapters :) I'm very curious about th syth. Update soon! :)
1/21/2014 c30 RingerASCE
Haha nice ending :) a typical Robin comment. I can't wait for Water 7 ( the best arc so far lol, my fav) I can't wait to see how Robin and Nami hook up May and Zoro ;) update soon!
Haha nice ending :) a typical Robin comment. I can't wait for Water 7 ( the best arc so far lol, my fav) I can't wait to see how Robin and Nami hook up May and Zoro ;) update soon!
1/14/2014 c29 RingerASCE
Haha funny ending :) this was an awesome chapter, as usual ;) haha I want to read more sooooo bad! I loved the moment between May and Zoro, but Minho had to ruin it! :( please update SUPER soon! Lol Franky moment :)
Haha funny ending :) this was an awesome chapter, as usual ;) haha I want to read more sooooo bad! I loved the moment between May and Zoro, but Minho had to ruin it! :( please update SUPER soon! Lol Franky moment :)
1/5/2014 c28 RingerASCE
I'm so glad u finally updated! Y can't may just ask out Zoro! Or vis versa ;) awesome chapter as always, update SUPER soon please!
I'm so glad u finally updated! Y can't may just ask out Zoro! Or vis versa ;) awesome chapter as always, update SUPER soon please!