
9/1/2013 c5
12sDan12
New chapter! Glad to see it. I see no spelling errors and everything looks good. I'm glad to see more of the story and I'm glad it's coming along nicely.

New chapter! Glad to see it. I see no spelling errors and everything looks good. I'm glad to see more of the story and I'm glad it's coming along nicely.
8/15/2013 c4
12sDan12
I'm not sure that I believe that Ethan guy. There is something off about him. Anway, please continue!

I'm not sure that I believe that Ethan guy. There is something off about him. Anway, please continue!
8/15/2013 c4
2BrokenSubjectMatter
gah you can't just leave me hanging like that D: LOVED this chapter please post more soon (:

gah you can't just leave me hanging like that D: LOVED this chapter please post more soon (:
8/9/2013 c3
12sDan12
Good chapter! The way Melanie freaked out was amusing. Can't wait for the next one. This is starting to get even more interesting. Sorry for the laste review!

Good chapter! The way Melanie freaked out was amusing. Can't wait for the next one. This is starting to get even more interesting. Sorry for the laste review!
8/8/2013 c3
10pretend it was just a dream
Okay, so this may be the last time I can talk for the next two weeks, seeing as I am heading up to Maine for a while but a few things (NOTHING BAD!)
1.) Willingham? Like...like TRAVIS WILLINGHAM? Like Mori? Sorry, that's all I could think about
2.) Oh my gosh, Mel is going to be an heir to her family? What is this?!

Okay, so this may be the last time I can talk for the next two weeks, seeing as I am heading up to Maine for a while but a few things (NOTHING BAD!)
1.) Willingham? Like...like TRAVIS WILLINGHAM? Like Mori? Sorry, that's all I could think about
2.) Oh my gosh, Mel is going to be an heir to her family? What is this?!
7/29/2013 c2
10pretend it was just a dream
Oooooh Meeeeeel! You got into a fiiiiiiiiight! Okay, I will stop being childish now...
I liked this chapter better than the first, though the first was still great. I should be free for a couple weeks before I head on up to Maine so...

Oooooh Meeeeeel! You got into a fiiiiiiiiight! Okay, I will stop being childish now...
I liked this chapter better than the first, though the first was still great. I should be free for a couple weeks before I head on up to Maine so...