for Trust Me7/25/2013 c1 
12sDan12
Wow. It was a good first chapter. Definitly leaves the reader wanting more. I was kind've surprised at how quickly the turn had taken for the story. It's all light and happy and then hits you in the face at the end. This seems like it's going to be a good story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
12sDan12Wow. It was a good first chapter. Definitly leaves the reader wanting more. I was kind've surprised at how quickly the turn had taken for the story. It's all light and happy and then hits you in the face at the end. This seems like it's going to be a good story. Can't wait for the next chapter!