for Kinder Times Will Come For Us11/26/2013 c1 
13Naomi S. Goldson
Ahh sad George makes me so sad, but these two are so cute. It almost made me want to jump off my George/Hermione ship and swim over to these two (not quite to that point, but dragging me away from my OTP would be quite the feat.. So props for pushing me close to that point).
I like the hope in this story, and how perfectly suited they are. Angelina matches him in intelligence and humor, and I love that (I'm not a fan of the annoying Quidditch obsessed doll that most people turn her into). I genuinely liked her, and I'm fairly certain that if I were to meet this Angelina, we would be pretty good friends.
I liked how you developed their relationship as well. That you didn't just throw them in the deep end and let the couple sink or swim was nice; easig into it was more natural and realistic, especially following the death of Fred (excuse me while I go cry over his coffin).
Excellent job :)
13Naomi S. GoldsonAhh sad George makes me so sad, but these two are so cute. It almost made me want to jump off my George/Hermione ship and swim over to these two (not quite to that point, but dragging me away from my OTP would be quite the feat.. So props for pushing me close to that point).
I like the hope in this story, and how perfectly suited they are. Angelina matches him in intelligence and humor, and I love that (I'm not a fan of the annoying Quidditch obsessed doll that most people turn her into). I genuinely liked her, and I'm fairly certain that if I were to meet this Angelina, we would be pretty good friends.
I liked how you developed their relationship as well. That you didn't just throw them in the deep end and let the couple sink or swim was nice; easig into it was more natural and realistic, especially following the death of Fred (excuse me while I go cry over his coffin).
Excellent job :)
10/15/2013 c1 238starlight.moon.princess
Ah, this was lovely :)
I really liked the fact that they don't get married just for George and have it result in an extremely dysfunctional relationship, because that's rather overdone and cliched.
I loved the line about the what-ifs - can't C&P it here after FFN has stopped copying - it's so poignant and I can definitely imagine the two of them feeling that way after losing Fred.
This was wonderful - well done! :)
238starlight.moon.princessAh, this was lovely :)
I really liked the fact that they don't get married just for George and have it result in an extremely dysfunctional relationship, because that's rather overdone and cliched.
I loved the line about the what-ifs - can't C&P it here after FFN has stopped copying - it's so poignant and I can definitely imagine the two of them feeling that way after losing Fred.
This was wonderful - well done! :)
9/7/2013 c1 14emazings
This was everything George and Angelina should be, in love, easy, but still reeling at the pain of Fred's death. I loved it, especially this line:
It's the pattern of their painful co-existence, it's difficult and exhausting and nothing short of dysfunctional, but somehow they make it work.
Beautiful work, I hope the rest of your fics prove to be just as great, I'm going over and checking them out right now!
14emazingsThis was everything George and Angelina should be, in love, easy, but still reeling at the pain of Fred's death. I loved it, especially this line:
It's the pattern of their painful co-existence, it's difficult and exhausting and nothing short of dysfunctional, but somehow they make it work.
Beautiful work, I hope the rest of your fics prove to be just as great, I'm going over and checking them out right now!
7/27/2013 c1 626yellow 14
I love the way you made the two of them fit together and nicely dealt with the whole issue of Fred. Well written, keep writing
626yellow 14I love the way you made the two of them fit together and nicely dealt with the whole issue of Fred. Well written, keep writing
7/26/2013 c1 48bonniebonbon
As soon as I saw "rollercoaster" in the summary, I thought of the TFiOS quote-"I'm on a rollercoaster that only goes up" :P I really liked this line in your summary: George, Angelina and the ghost that hangs between them.
I really love this, I haven't read a good George/Angelina for a long time. I've always thought-what about Fred? So, Angelina just ditches him for the other twin? You wrote this very well-how they were both coping with his death, and then find comfort in each other, and how they don't work out because of Fred, but then...UGH. I'm basically just telling you your own amazing story XD
Again, I really loved this. My favourite section (if I had to choose) was the one where George gets drunk and compares himself to his twin.
I hope you do well in your competitions :P
48bonniebonbonAs soon as I saw "rollercoaster" in the summary, I thought of the TFiOS quote-"I'm on a rollercoaster that only goes up" :P I really liked this line in your summary: George, Angelina and the ghost that hangs between them.
I really love this, I haven't read a good George/Angelina for a long time. I've always thought-what about Fred? So, Angelina just ditches him for the other twin? You wrote this very well-how they were both coping with his death, and then find comfort in each other, and how they don't work out because of Fred, but then...UGH. I'm basically just telling you your own amazing story XD
Again, I really loved this. My favourite section (if I had to choose) was the one where George gets drunk and compares himself to his twin.
I hope you do well in your competitions :P
7/26/2013 c1 11Painting Politics and Poland
That was absolutely brilliant. I loved the line "They take two stools at the bar and wait, each lost in a maze of what-if's and could-have-been's and thoughts they cannot voice."
I also loved how at the end, Angelina learns how to only see George.
I'm not sure how I feel about the opening line. It didn't really grab me and I didn't like the phrasing "two people with the same Fred-shaped hole in their hearts.". Maybe it's just me being picky though.
There were one or two run-on sentences that I noticed, but I don't mind because I feel that it made this story more poetic.
All in all, good job.
11Painting Politics and PolandThat was absolutely brilliant. I loved the line "They take two stools at the bar and wait, each lost in a maze of what-if's and could-have-been's and thoughts they cannot voice."
I also loved how at the end, Angelina learns how to only see George.
I'm not sure how I feel about the opening line. It didn't really grab me and I didn't like the phrasing "two people with the same Fred-shaped hole in their hearts.". Maybe it's just me being picky though.
There were one or two run-on sentences that I noticed, but I don't mind because I feel that it made this story more poetic.
All in all, good job.
7/26/2013 c1 12Princess Unikitty
great little story.
"Life, after all, is the greatest ride they'll ever know."
definitely the best line. says a lot as to how unpredictable one's life can be. makes for a good complementary analogy to the box of chocolates one.
12Princess Unikittygreat little story.
"Life, after all, is the greatest ride they'll ever know."
definitely the best line. says a lot as to how unpredictable one's life can be. makes for a good complementary analogy to the box of chocolates one.
7/26/2013 c1 1eveningstars
This was really beautifully written! There aren't a lot of fics about these two so it was great to read! I can totally imagine them getting together like this. Great job! :))
1eveningstarsThis was really beautifully written! There aren't a lot of fics about these two so it was great to read! I can totally imagine them getting together like this. Great job! :))