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4/22/2017 c1 Mike3207
Good start to the story-would like to see a sequel to this.
3/3/2014 c1 11Myth Magyk Fae
Cute, sweet, well written, and with characters that went into emotions... Good work! :D
10/17/2013 c1 4steamboat
I loved this! I only watched the early series of Buffy and I loved that, but even though I don't know all of the characters here I still enjoyed reading this very much. xxx
7/27/2013 c1 17Xanderrocksthehouse
I like the story. For one it fits outside of the box of the usual Buffy pairing. Lord knows we can't get enough of pairing Buffy up with some undead corpse. Cause lets face it everyone loves Buffy/Spike or Buffy/Angel. Any time you right any fic not making them the center of the universe you already start off at a solid 5 in my opinion. Extra point for making Buffy more then just some robotic mechanical warrior. You showed her with good emotion and depth. It was well written and the fact that it is Buffy/Xander(my have pairing) gives you another point. Bringing you my 7. If I want for anything it's a potential follow up. You have an amazing starting point here
1. How hard would it be to make the transition in the long term from best friend to boyfriend and later to potentially lovers? Facts are things would have to change. Would be interesting to see that awkwardness at first till they find the rhythm of who it is they are.
2. How are those around them going to re act. I could hear Spike potentially jealous and laying in to her. Angel belittling Xander telling him something along the lines she didn't choose you cause she loves you she chose you cause you were the only available choice in a school filled with girls. What would Dawn feel? I mean she secretly crushed on Xander for years and then Buffy scoops in and just bam takes him? Where would Willow be on it. I mean she is friends with both of them but the idea of them taking such a huge risky step that could alter there friendship forever and would change the dynamic of the group. If she didn't have an opinion she'd get one quick.
Any ways if you choose to make this a one shot and leave it as is I'd say it was good happy piece and I enjoyed reading it. Hope to read more from you in the future.

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