6/24 c70 SuddenBetrayal
Just finished this story after starting it about a week ago and really enjoyed it overall. It really went in some wacky directions for something I thought was just going to be fun harem antics. I really did not see Bill Cypher coming back as an antagonist for real, I just assumed those would all just be one off references to other shows. This has been a ride and I am glad that if this story is dead because of impatient jerks at least it ended at a relatively decent stopping point. At the very least it was not a cliffhanger and I would be interested in where you would take this from here. I mean I really don't know what the plan for Nephthys would be at this point as I assume you wrote this before the whole not actually dead thing was revealed. I mean it wouldn't be the first plot point that could be explained away with the whole alt universe thing we are going with to explain the extremely non canon compliant Misaki backstory but that's a problem any pre NT11 fanfic has as the canon backstory was really unpredictable. Anyway let it be known that at the very least I read and enjoyed this story you wrote.

4/24 c5 kamenriderzio218
Was hoping they could see the dragon coming out but I guess not

4/16 c55 Guest
I like what you’ve done with pierce… however didn’t Moses say something offhanded about Gunha being their son from the future?, I guess it was a joke… or maybe they just don’t need to know yet huh.

-LAKYAS03

4/10 c31 Guest
Damn… things aren’t looking so great for mikoto, at all, I mean wow she’s basically lost her chances. For what it’s worth the Tsun-Tsun is cute but… Touma is a brick wall against obvious signs of affection so here in this fic where her competition is multiplying and advancing as she sits clueless in the back… it’s pretty hopeless- or NOT!, you said she’d have her part and all things considered I have yet to witness it.

Látom

-LAKYAS-03

4/10 c23 Guest
The Kamikoto preacher in me is confused, but maybe it’s necessary for balance, but damn Mikoto you are totally drawing all of the short straws.

LAKYAS-03

12/23/2022 c1 7JDog2K
It’s been a minute since I read this story there were only 64 chapters, you take your stuff to Meta levels, something I would not do but it is entertaining nonetheless the less, hope it gets updated more

10/13/2021 c70 Guest
i wonder if kanzaki is gonna live in his dorm