for The World of Loveless6/16 c20 elizabethtyler937
This was a fantastic read! I really enjoyed it. It kept me engaged from start to finish , and I found myself really drawn into the world you created. I’d love to hear more about your thoughts while writing this what inspired certain choices? Any behind-the-scenes details you’d like to share? Overall, this piece stands strong as it is, and I just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoyed it . Looking forward to seeing more of your work!.
This was a fantastic read! I really enjoyed it. It kept me engaged from start to finish , and I found myself really drawn into the world you created. I’d love to hear more about your thoughts while writing this what inspired certain choices? Any behind-the-scenes details you’d like to share? Overall, this piece stands strong as it is, and I just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoyed it . Looking forward to seeing more of your work!.
5/6 c1 Natalie4q6
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Just came across a site called Storio (storioai dot com). It basically gamifies your story—like Twine, but easier. Just thought I’d share in case others might like it too.
1/21/2020 c56 
48The DarkCat
The emotions in this chapter were amazingly portrayed. Ritsuka's despair and worthlessness felt realistic... This was really great read. Thank you.
48The DarkCatThe emotions in this chapter were amazingly portrayed. Ritsuka's despair and worthlessness felt realistic... This was really great read. Thank you.
1/19/2020 c56 145Dlbn
Welcome back. Poor Ritsuka. I know how he feels. Depression is such a pain in the backside. Soubi takes care of him because he loves him and wants to do so, he considers it his job as a Fighter. I think Ritsuka knows that deep down, but depression won't let him believe it.
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145DlbnWelcome back. Poor Ritsuka. I know how he feels. Depression is such a pain in the backside. Soubi takes care of him because he loves him and wants to do so, he considers it his job as a Fighter. I think Ritsuka knows that deep down, but depression won't let him believe it.
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6/20/2018 c20 48The DarkCat
I simply loved the writing style of this fic . And I kinda think that it actually might be reason for Ritsuka to not be interested in women. Really interesting idea and could be seen as a good horror element, sorry just a simple horror lover over here... I never thought about it before. Nice idea.
And then how we have Soubi come in and act as a substitute for Ritsuka's parents. Ah, that is just so adorable. Arigato.
This probably my favorite one so far
48The DarkCatI simply loved the writing style of this fic . And I kinda think that it actually might be reason for Ritsuka to not be interested in women. Really interesting idea and could be seen as a good horror element, sorry just a simple horror lover over here... I never thought about it before. Nice idea.
And then how we have Soubi come in and act as a substitute for Ritsuka's parents. Ah, that is just so adorable. Arigato.
This probably my favorite one so far
6/20/2018 c18 The DarkCat
Deep, true and saddening, damn you Ritsu... Sorry that just slipped, I'm sad for Soubi being treated like an object or possesion... How I love these drabbles cant stop reading them. A deep thank you goes to the author. : )
Deep, true and saddening, damn you Ritsu... Sorry that just slipped, I'm sad for Soubi being treated like an object or possesion... How I love these drabbles cant stop reading them. A deep thank you goes to the author. : )
6/20/2018 c9 The DarkCat
Oh.. I liked this one... Typical cruel Seimei though. The last sentence made me nearly flinch.
Oh.. I liked this one... Typical cruel Seimei though. The last sentence made me nearly flinch.
6/20/2018 c8 The DarkCat
I'm touched, cute drabble by the way, poor Ritsuka all alone in Soubi's appartment, it doesnt feel the same without him in there... Its nice that you mentioned Soubi's parents
I'm touched, cute drabble by the way, poor Ritsuka all alone in Soubi's appartment, it doesnt feel the same without him in there... Its nice that you mentioned Soubi's parents
9/5/2015 c1 Guest
that was lovely
that was lovely
10/24/2014 c52 promocat
kidney stones & cysts are right up there in pain!I am glad you are getting thu it(remember this too shall pass{esp. the kidney stone;)!])
kidney stones & cysts are right up there in pain!I am glad you are getting thu it(remember this too shall pass{esp. the kidney stone;)!])
9/8/2014 c51 promocat
whew! that's not an ending I forsaw for either of them!(1 I thought ristuka would die young-2 seimei would kill/take him,3 soubi &ristuka would find away to be together forever(& not always alive forever either)or yuiko would marry yayoi)
whew! that's not an ending I forsaw for either of them!(1 I thought ristuka would die young-2 seimei would kill/take him,3 soubi &ristuka would find away to be together forever(& not always alive forever either)or yuiko would marry yayoi)