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for Their First Morning

11/11/2013 c1 8clarisse romero
właśnie bardzo dobrze powiedziane ostatnie zdanie
"przynajmniej nie mamy do ukrycia go więcej "
bardzo fajne :D kocham ten rozdział
czemu taki krótki ? było super
7/31/2013 c1 26Clarisse Elizondo
It was very cute. Not bad for your first one :)
7/29/2013 c1 60Johanna-002
I personally thought this was adorable. I do not think it classifies as "M" you could move it tony be "T" or "k" and from there it will appear in the thread a lot more noticable and you'll get more hits & maybe reviews... Just saying.
I hope to see more from you because I personally loved it!
-jo
7/29/2013 c1 ShadyDame
As a frequent reader of PD fanfiction (mostly Clarisse and Joseph) I have to say that this wasn't my cup of tea. Too short and much too impersonal. The word spoken between them doesn't sound like C & J at all and what's up with this Joey-thing? Clarisse would never call him that, it's not her style, to her he is always Joseph. Just my two cents, better luck next time :)
7/29/2013 c1 Veve
That sounds so much like them.

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