
2/26/2018 c1
2Aizzec
So far so good, if you do continue this, which I would love if you did, I hope Yoruichi starts too love Starrk. So I think this would be great as a multi chaptered instead of a One-shot.

So far so good, if you do continue this, which I would love if you did, I hope Yoruichi starts too love Starrk. So I think this would be great as a multi chaptered instead of a One-shot.
10/6/2013 c1 Guest
Please continue the story!
Please continue the story!
9/14/2013 c1
7ZiggyGebs777
More! Definitely more!
You do need a bit of work on grammar and punctuation, though. Otherwise, not bad at all.

More! Definitely more!
You do need a bit of work on grammar and punctuation, though. Otherwise, not bad at all.
7/31/2013 c1 Guest
This looks interesting. Please, continue.
This looks interesting. Please, continue.
7/30/2013 c1 DragonSlayer96
This story's plot is so good! I'd really love to see the process of this. Is Starkk real? Is he a true demon or just a hallucination? If he is a demon then this is a story which contains supernatural/spiritual kinds of things? Will you add more character in this story as doctors or patients that will be Yoruichi's friend(like Neliel) or Yoruichi's family? Argh so many questions. If you can please continue this story:3
This story's plot is so good! I'd really love to see the process of this. Is Starkk real? Is he a true demon or just a hallucination? If he is a demon then this is a story which contains supernatural/spiritual kinds of things? Will you add more character in this story as doctors or patients that will be Yoruichi's friend(like Neliel) or Yoruichi's family? Argh so many questions. If you can please continue this story:3
7/29/2013 c1
1RAMI MALEKS TYPE
Best plot idea ever! This one-shot was great material and I believe was heavily delicious (and I don't say that because I have food on my mind). If it wouldn't be too much to ask, yes I would love it if you'd continue this for how ever long it is capable of going.
Oh and also, will Yoruichi have any other friends that are also patients like Rangiku, and would we also get let in on their conditions?

Best plot idea ever! This one-shot was great material and I believe was heavily delicious (and I don't say that because I have food on my mind). If it wouldn't be too much to ask, yes I would love it if you'd continue this for how ever long it is capable of going.
Oh and also, will Yoruichi have any other friends that are also patients like Rangiku, and would we also get let in on their conditions?
7/29/2013 c1 DarkKnight96
Well I think this story has potential! Please continue this, there are so many mysteries I wanna know:3
Well I think this story has potential! Please continue this, there are so many mysteries I wanna know:3