for Down Memory Lane4/1/2012 c5 
7Rabidchipmonk of doom
I loved the first few chapters but now i'm so confused.
I'm struggling to follow the story, theres too much going on!
If you go over this again then perhaps you could put a little more of the Harry Potter genre into the story, and introduce the OC's a little more because I don't feel as if i know them at all.
I know it's a while since you updated but I think that constructive criticism can help, even when the story is on hiatus.
Rabid Chipmonk.
7Rabidchipmonk of doomI loved the first few chapters but now i'm so confused.
I'm struggling to follow the story, theres too much going on!
If you go over this again then perhaps you could put a little more of the Harry Potter genre into the story, and introduce the OC's a little more because I don't feel as if i know them at all.
I know it's a while since you updated but I think that constructive criticism can help, even when the story is on hiatus.
Rabid Chipmonk.
5/24/2004 c10 The Ice Weasel
I love the story. Update. Please. Now.
I love the story. Update. Please. Now.
1/12/2004 c10 Ash
Awesomely opossumly(sp?)! Way to go. Yayzlez. So happy!
Awesomely opossumly(sp?)! Way to go. Yayzlez. So happy!
1/12/2004 c5 eel
pretty sure your brain is waterlogged so quit writing this crap and stick to what you best...eat, sleep, swim anyways...
pretty sure your brain is waterlogged so quit writing this crap and stick to what you best...eat, sleep, swim anyways...
11/2/2003 c9 9bookwyrm22
cruel and unusual punishment!cruel and unusual!more soon!Polyjuice Daniel! eek! He better not have shot her I'll ::is held back by friend:: more soon!much more soon!
9bookwyrm22cruel and unusual punishment!cruel and unusual!more soon!Polyjuice Daniel! eek! He better not have shot her I'll ::is held back by friend:: more soon!much more soon!
10/18/2003 c9 FLFlower
AG!
YOU. MUST. UPDATE. Seriously, it's so good but YOU ARE SO EVIL WHEN IT COMES TO CLIFFHANGERS!
AG!
YOU. MUST. UPDATE. Seriously, it's so good but YOU ARE SO EVIL WHEN IT COMES TO CLIFFHANGERS!
10/11/2003 c8 FLFlower
So awesome!
I loved:
The UK? Jack thought, bewildered. What the hell…they speak English there!
~&~
“America? What the hell…they speak English there!” Ron burst out, surprised.
and...
“It’s not just anywhere in America, Ron,” she told him.
“New York?”
“No.”
“Well, where, then? There’s not really very many desirable places in America…oh, wait, Florida? California?”
“Washington,” Hermione said, impatient with his rong guesses.
“WASHINGTON? As in DC? We’re going to the capital?”
“NO, VANCOUVER, Washington.”
“Canada? What? The notice says we’ll be in America!” Ron looked thoroughly confused.
And I think I know who MarySue is! ~Cackles~ So perfect.
You should fire Nova (No pun intended).In one part you say "rong" instead of "wrong."
Wonder how many flames you'll get from preps...
So awesome!
I loved:
The UK? Jack thought, bewildered. What the hell…they speak English there!
~&~
“America? What the hell…they speak English there!” Ron burst out, surprised.
and...
“It’s not just anywhere in America, Ron,” she told him.
“New York?”
“No.”
“Well, where, then? There’s not really very many desirable places in America…oh, wait, Florida? California?”
“Washington,” Hermione said, impatient with his rong guesses.
“WASHINGTON? As in DC? We’re going to the capital?”
“NO, VANCOUVER, Washington.”
“Canada? What? The notice says we’ll be in America!” Ron looked thoroughly confused.
And I think I know who MarySue is! ~Cackles~ So perfect.
You should fire Nova (No pun intended).In one part you say "rong" instead of "wrong."
Wonder how many flames you'll get from preps...
10/4/2003 c8 cricket
And I am where! Did I just kinda sorta disappear without it happening yet? I need to be in there. kirsten didn't even talk about where i was. i need to be in the story more!
And I am where! Did I just kinda sorta disappear without it happening yet? I need to be in there. kirsten didn't even talk about where i was. i need to be in the story more!
9/4/2003 c7 Emerald Moonbeams
come on update this is the best
come on update this is the best
8/25/2003 c1 FloridaFlower
Ah, you've got chappies 1 and 2 mixed up.
Ah, you've got chappies 1 and 2 mixed up.
8/20/2003 c7 Nicole K. C
Great story
Great story
8/17/2003 c8 lilly pad
hello!you said the end of july didn't you well consolt a calander 'cuz it's the 8th mounth of the year. so can u plez update!thanks!;)
lils *
hello!you said the end of july didn't you well consolt a calander 'cuz it's the 8th mounth of the year. so can u plez update!thanks!;)
lils *
7/28/2003 c1 Ael L. Bolt
*rereading the thing since she has nothing better to do* Hey! What's wrong with getting a driving permit at 16? I'm 16 and I got my permit two months ago. ^_^; And YES, I'm a Yankee. American. Whateva.
*rereading the thing since she has nothing better to do* Hey! What's wrong with getting a driving permit at 16? I'm 16 and I got my permit two months ago. ^_^; And YES, I'm a Yankee. American. Whateva.