
11/20/2015 c1 Guest
ok...do not tell me... that ash is going to leave?!
ok...do not tell me... that ash is going to leave?!
11/19/2015 c1 Guest
Start updating faster or else...
Anyways, stories are as amazing as always! Keep up the good work...and updates
Start updating faster or else...
Anyways, stories are as amazing as always! Keep up the good work...and updates
5/31/2015 c1 hendriejoseph
hope you return to post new chapters for this story its one of the best out here for sure hope you come back soon ...
hope you return to post new chapters for this story its one of the best out here for sure hope you come back soon ...
11/2/2014 c1
3Deadspaceman616
Well I really hope you continue this story I know it's been a year and a half but we are all still following this story and you, your first was just great you did way better than me on my first attempt, love the charctor development the best and the story arcs hit the mark. so continue writing it's never to late to start again keep it up you got talent

Well I really hope you continue this story I know it's been a year and a half but we are all still following this story and you, your first was just great you did way better than me on my first attempt, love the charctor development the best and the story arcs hit the mark. so continue writing it's never to late to start again keep it up you got talent
10/8/2014 c1 shippingfan
Please continue the story!
Please continue the story!
10/7/2014 c1 Pearlshipper
Bam!
MOOAAAAR!
awesome story start!
Bam!
MOOAAAAR!
awesome story start!
9/1/2014 c1 Pearlshipper
Awesome! MOARR PLEASE!
Awesome! MOARR PLEASE!
9/1/2014 c1 Guest
Waiting anxiously for new chapters keep up the amazing work
Waiting anxiously for new chapters keep up the amazing work