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5/30/2014 c1 Valon
Great story please continue writing it
5/7/2014 c1 Joseph Hendrie
do you think ash is going to be ok with red going out with dasiy ?
what about the baby why not tell dawns mother or ashs mother only the former champion i don't get it ?
and about the baby is it going to be a boy or a girl what about ash friends will they find out about the baby ? and what about dawns friends what will they think ?
well will ash ever meet his father ?
and how will the friends and family take the news about dawn having a baby ?
and what about ash vs tobis first match as champion ...
well i hope you post chapters 2 and 3 soon i am hoping its great as the last story ...
4/20/2014 c1 PearlArmourShipper771
I loved your previous story SO much, and already love this chapter!

PLEASE continue writing this!

is anything holding you back? If so, please do you best to overcome it (I probably sound really pushy and ass-hole ish right now but i am in LOVE with this plot)

4/11/2014 c1 2J. Jamie Dupane
The story is wonderful so far...
Nice cliff hanger...
I hope you keep up the work and update as soon as you can...
3/26/2014 c1 vmdnv
great so far! i have a feeling it will be better than a pokemon future! plz post next chap soon
3/15/2014 c1 flamex407
nice please continue the story
3/7/2014 c1 2TheGoldenPokeball
Wow! That's all I can say! This is such an amazing story, I can't wait for the sequel! Plz write quickly!
1/2/2014 c1 1Corvo Regandorf
I love your stories please I understand that you have stuff todo but if ca please hurry up and right I wold love to see what happens with ash and dawn
12/21/2013 c1 joseph.hendrie
the story here is theres only one chapter here are you still writing ?
if so will this story have ash and dawn have lemoe scenes ? before and after the baby cool
anyway yes i did read the future one you had put nice work are you going to be doing more storys soon all you have is 2 one with future with 27 chapters and this on only i chapter anyway keep it going see you soon i hope with at least with 10 chapters done i miss reading your storys

your number one fan
12/6/2013 c1 adyson43
a legendary has appeared or it is team rocket.
11/20/2013 c1 mikey
It's awesome so far. I have a couple of suggestions for baby names. If its a boy, you could call him Caleb, if its a girl you could call her Louise. Of course, It's your story, and as such, your decision. I can't wait for your next chapter. Please email me if you have any problems, or need advice. My email is pikachuboyONETWOTHREWFOURFIVESIXSEVENEIGHTNINETENE LEVENATgmailDOTcom. (caps are numbers in the digit format and symbols)
10/29/2013 c1 Sean Morse
keep going man.
9/28/2013 c1 TheSeaDragon
I don't have anything to say... Just post next chapter I am waiting! ;)
9/22/2013 c1 Guest
9/10/2013 c1 Guest
Please tell me that you didn't drop this story, because I LOVED the first one and I can't wait to see more of the sequel.
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