
9/5/2021 c22 Guest
The Dragon contract is too much on top of his kekkei genkai, unique taijutsu and his prodigal sealing ability. And on top of Kushina being alive, other Uzumaki just keep randomly appearing seriously wtf
The Dragon contract is too much on top of his kekkei genkai, unique taijutsu and his prodigal sealing ability. And on top of Kushina being alive, other Uzumaki just keep randomly appearing seriously wtf
1/5/2021 c1 stevendrury2549
In all the fanfictions ive read they always mention 'im sorry naruto i cant tell you about your parents because they had powerful enemies' I can see how that is a concern but its not like the enemies are gonna know about naruto if you tell him about his parents, it just never made sense cause you can just make naruto keep it a secret
In all the fanfictions ive read they always mention 'im sorry naruto i cant tell you about your parents because they had powerful enemies' I can see how that is a concern but its not like the enemies are gonna know about naruto if you tell him about his parents, it just never made sense cause you can just make naruto keep it a secret
10/31/2020 c22 Ricky
You know this story actually had potential but quickly derailed. Kushina being revived really just didn’t sit well with me. Her reason for being alive was just made up nonsense that made no sense other than the fact to be brought back into the story. The addition of Random OCS hurt the plot as well since random powerful ninja are just popping out of nowhere. And to note the CRA is completely nonexistent in the actual cannon storyline and is made up by fanfic writers. Even if you want to add in its something that can not be forced. The hokage is literally the dictator of the village his word is law. Civilians are irrelevant along with the elders they hold no actual authority it’s a joke.
You know this story actually had potential but quickly derailed. Kushina being revived really just didn’t sit well with me. Her reason for being alive was just made up nonsense that made no sense other than the fact to be brought back into the story. The addition of Random OCS hurt the plot as well since random powerful ninja are just popping out of nowhere. And to note the CRA is completely nonexistent in the actual cannon storyline and is made up by fanfic writers. Even if you want to add in its something that can not be forced. The hokage is literally the dictator of the village his word is law. Civilians are irrelevant along with the elders they hold no actual authority it’s a joke.
10/15/2020 c7 HardlyFlaccid
Ummm the story isn't bad, but in this chapter, 90% of the genjutsu part was ripped from Team 10 by S'Tarkan. Just saying, plagiarism is bad.
Ummm the story isn't bad, but in this chapter, 90% of the genjutsu part was ripped from Team 10 by S'Tarkan. Just saying, plagiarism is bad.
6/24/2020 c24 Consultant
I dont get why thetes a lot of weird things going between women in this story but you need to keep your sexuality away from these innocent characters
I dont get why thetes a lot of weird things going between women in this story but you need to keep your sexuality away from these innocent characters
6/9/2020 c17
2Stone Elbow
Yes, yes, yes! It's getting interesting! Romance! Drama! Deviation from canon!
I was worried for the first few chapters that you were just going to follow the same old storyline despite the changes you made. A few too many long passages straight from canon. I guess your skillz have improved since then?

Yes, yes, yes! It's getting interesting! Romance! Drama! Deviation from canon!
I was worried for the first few chapters that you were just going to follow the same old storyline despite the changes you made. A few too many long passages straight from canon. I guess your skillz have improved since then?
5/17/2020 c32 ArashiNokitsune
So you just out right shatter the safe of six paths why I thought that the guy can’t even interact with the living world only if the juubi or some conditions meet other than that he’s only a spirit that can’t do anything but talk the do little else without aid, he’s just a soul I get your introducing a new villain but salt on wound for the dead sage don’t dis him like that
So you just out right shatter the safe of six paths why I thought that the guy can’t even interact with the living world only if the juubi or some conditions meet other than that he’s only a spirit that can’t do anything but talk the do little else without aid, he’s just a soul I get your introducing a new villain but salt on wound for the dead sage don’t dis him like that
4/9/2020 c32 Guest
Well, I am was certainly surprised and delighted with the twists and turns and just utter surprises this fanfiction has brung. I have so many questions about the lore (more specifically the Uzumaki and their contributions). My heat goes out to Kushina, it was an accurate description someone lodged a Kunai in her heart, and I think it never stopped bleeding. I very much enjoyed this fic, and was Sasuke hasn’t defected (at least not yet) and that Itachi realized how skewered his reasoning was for traumatizing his little brother into killing him. Breathtaking fic mate. It felt the fic’s emotions were my emotions, it reacted in kind to what I felt at certain moments. EPPPPPICCCC! *plus ultra thumbs up* ()~
Well, I am was certainly surprised and delighted with the twists and turns and just utter surprises this fanfiction has brung. I have so many questions about the lore (more specifically the Uzumaki and their contributions). My heat goes out to Kushina, it was an accurate description someone lodged a Kunai in her heart, and I think it never stopped bleeding. I very much enjoyed this fic, and was Sasuke hasn’t defected (at least not yet) and that Itachi realized how skewered his reasoning was for traumatizing his little brother into killing him. Breathtaking fic mate. It felt the fic’s emotions were my emotions, it reacted in kind to what I felt at certain moments. EPPPPPICCCC! *plus ultra thumbs up* ()~
3/26/2020 c1 Buttermywhale
I’m so disappointed in myself I read shoton as shotacon WTF!? IS WRONG WITH ME
I’m so disappointed in myself I read shoton as shotacon WTF!? IS WRONG WITH ME
3/18/2020 c25 Autobot-Wolfsketch
This was a great chapter a well-done fight between Naruto and Rock Lee and the sunset of youth had me laughing so much I was crying.
This was a great chapter a well-done fight between Naruto and Rock Lee and the sunset of youth had me laughing so much I was crying.
3/15/2020 c3 Guest
Your explanation for how Naruto’s Shoton works was wrong. You said he can crystallise anything with mass and that it doesn’t work on energy. This doesn’t make sense as energy has mass as demonstrated by the equation E mc2. Energy is equal to mass multiplied by the constant squared( in most cases the constant being the speed of light, 3 x 10 to the power 8 metres per second).
Your explanation for how Naruto’s Shoton works was wrong. You said he can crystallise anything with mass and that it doesn’t work on energy. This doesn’t make sense as energy has mass as demonstrated by the equation E mc2. Energy is equal to mass multiplied by the constant squared( in most cases the constant being the speed of light, 3 x 10 to the power 8 metres per second).
1/13/2020 c26
7Cranky Monkey 699
Hahahaha chains! I thought of using that but I usually try to avoid certain kinks. Brilliant hahahaha

Hahahaha chains! I thought of using that but I usually try to avoid certain kinks. Brilliant hahahaha
1/11/2020 c1 Cranky Monkey 699
The term brick sh** house. Are you an Aussie? I’ve never heard it from anybody else is all
The term brick sh** house. Are you an Aussie? I’ve never heard it from anybody else is all