
10/31/2019 c32 Bosma19
This is such a great story I love how you have written all the characters and that you have made naruto smarter in a realistic way I also cannot wait to see the way you are going to take this story
This is such a great story I love how you have written all the characters and that you have made naruto smarter in a realistic way I also cannot wait to see the way you are going to take this story
8/20/2019 c32
3Just4fun23000
Oh man, I broke down laughing as I read this chapter! This was one of the best joke's that I've ever read!
I remember that only a few chapters ago, I think it was chapter 27, you've stated that you wish to 'build-upon' the Naruto world.
And now five chapters later we have Super-Girl! I bet in another ten or so chapters you will have Gilgamesh and Artoria duke it out with their noble phantasms.
Great World Building, I have to admit! The Naruto world is suddenly so very deep and oh so complex that I can hardly keep up!

Oh man, I broke down laughing as I read this chapter! This was one of the best joke's that I've ever read!
I remember that only a few chapters ago, I think it was chapter 27, you've stated that you wish to 'build-upon' the Naruto world.
And now five chapters later we have Super-Girl! I bet in another ten or so chapters you will have Gilgamesh and Artoria duke it out with their noble phantasms.
Great World Building, I have to admit! The Naruto world is suddenly so very deep and oh so complex that I can hardly keep up!
8/13/2019 c32 Dragonman110
Will you please update some time soon I really want to read what happens next
Will you please update some time soon I really want to read what happens next
6/20/2019 c32 Mina
Super interesting!
Is good here that you improved NaruSaku relationship, and i want SakuHina and Naruhina too, can you pair Sasuke either with Ino or Tenten?or Anko ?
Please update soon ! I want SakuNaruHina , we need more of this OT3, there aren't many...
Super interesting!
Is good here that you improved NaruSaku relationship, and i want SakuHina and Naruhina too, can you pair Sasuke either with Ino or Tenten?or Anko ?
Please update soon ! I want SakuNaruHina , we need more of this OT3, there aren't many...
6/13/2019 c17 nielnica12
Hmm this is where i stopped, im not into kushina being alive. Shouldve leave the dead well dead.
Hmm this is where i stopped, im not into kushina being alive. Shouldve leave the dead well dead.
6/6/2019 c1 Guest
The person below should piss off. The author decided to write it as a harem.. just because you don’t appreciate it doesn’t mean that the author would (past tense due to the abandonment of the story) bend their story to your will.. just thought I should mention that. I love when people comment about how the story should be this this and this.. yet they aren’t the ones writing it.. and yes I know that people can constructively critize, however if they really don’t like something them maybe they should create a flawless storyline that has commenters commenting on how “perfect” the story is.. lmao
The person below should piss off. The author decided to write it as a harem.. just because you don’t appreciate it doesn’t mean that the author would (past tense due to the abandonment of the story) bend their story to your will.. just thought I should mention that. I love when people comment about how the story should be this this and this.. yet they aren’t the ones writing it.. and yes I know that people can constructively critize, however if they really don’t like something them maybe they should create a flawless storyline that has commenters commenting on how “perfect” the story is.. lmao
5/28/2019 c32 Ricky
Story seems abandon but I think the story is good most people wouldn’t like it since it does stray away from canon which isn’t a bad thing but people just can’t give it a chance. One problem I do have is the pairings not because it’s with a certain character but I would recommended you leave it a one girl instead of two. In the brackets it’s shows you plan to have naruto end up with both Sakura and hinata which personally I’m not a fan of harems they take away any significant bonds between characters. You should either stick with Sakura or hinata, personally based of your story so far I would write Naruto to be with hinata since I think the relationship would go off better for the story. And it would be a surprise for Kushina since she expects Naruto to end up with a girl like her which she’s sees similarities in sakura. Just my opinion tho this is your story if you ever end up continue it
Story seems abandon but I think the story is good most people wouldn’t like it since it does stray away from canon which isn’t a bad thing but people just can’t give it a chance. One problem I do have is the pairings not because it’s with a certain character but I would recommended you leave it a one girl instead of two. In the brackets it’s shows you plan to have naruto end up with both Sakura and hinata which personally I’m not a fan of harems they take away any significant bonds between characters. You should either stick with Sakura or hinata, personally based of your story so far I would write Naruto to be with hinata since I think the relationship would go off better for the story. And it would be a surprise for Kushina since she expects Naruto to end up with a girl like her which she’s sees similarities in sakura. Just my opinion tho this is your story if you ever end up continue it
5/5/2019 c27
7Ryusui Asakura
Are you going to continue this fanfic eventually I really wanted it to continue...

Are you going to continue this fanfic eventually I really wanted it to continue...
2/14/2019 c1 Rebmul
put this story on follow cause it seemed interesting wont actually read it till its updated
put this story on follow cause it seemed interesting wont actually read it till its updated
11/25/2018 c1 Dude
This isn't a tribute, this is someone leeching off someone elses work cos they think they could do "better"
This isn't a tribute, this is someone leeching off someone elses work cos they think they could do "better"
11/6/2018 c22 FelineCube
Alright, up until this point I was wavering on the edge of quitting, but this is a bit much, on the whole cliche front. Like, really? Too many OCs and OP creations suddenly. Still, if you’re looking for FanFiction to pass time, good read.
Alright, up until this point I was wavering on the edge of quitting, but this is a bit much, on the whole cliche front. Like, really? Too many OCs and OP creations suddenly. Still, if you’re looking for FanFiction to pass time, good read.
9/22/2018 c21 Guest
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