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4/15/2014 c11 10Traser SyberJedi
This is a good ending point for this story. However, I would love to read more about how things go as Joanna gets older. Suggestion- do them as separate stories, sequels to this one. That way they're distinct.
4/15/2014 c11 229katierosefun
OPTION TWO OPTION TWO OPTION TWO OPTION TWO CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE NOW
4/15/2014 c11 3PenChick
You could have the natural ending and make the rest of what you wrote a sequel. Just saying.

I love this story. You've done a great job with it.
3/30/2014 c10 229katierosefun
"Does this mean I have to write ANOTHER speech?!" I don't think I've ever laughed this hard! XD

And yes, Carol and Jim cuteness! XD

Thank you for updating!
3/30/2014 c10 10Traser SyberJedi
This is a wonderful story. I love the characterization of Joanna McCoy. I look forward to reading more.
3/29/2014 c10 3ConsultingAngelWarlock
awwwww yay for weddings! I love how this story is coming along :)
3/29/2014 c10 3numom1
This is a very good story and I love that Joanna is so precocious (sp?). I'm eagerly looking forward to your next update and I do hope it won't take 3 months... ;P
3/29/2014 c10 4Compliment Giver
I LEGITIMATELY JUST SQUEALED AT THAT LAST LINE AND OMFG NOW I CAN'T TALK YOU MADE ME LOSE MY VOICE YOU *sees Joanna watching*...meanie.
3/29/2014 c10 7Minecraft Guardiansaiyan
...wish Bones was also a best man...he is also Spock's friend...
3/29/2014 c10 NaomiBlue
I loved the wedding and Joanna sounds adorable. Jim's speech was good.
3/29/2014 c10 seacat03
I loved Joanna threatening Spock!
1/3/2014 c9 1Lauri3n
This is great!
12/28/2013 c9 1JennaIsHungry
Oh gosh I love this so so so much. I started reading and honestly could not stop. There's nothing I don't like about any of it. So perfect. I would definitely love a future chapter about McCoy going protective dad mode if/when Jo and Dylan become more than friends and Jim of course is like *winks* "you go girl" or also maybe Jim screens Jo about relationship stuff like "uhm what should I get Carol as a present" or maybe even a legitimate problem and he's just always honest with Jo so he tells her and I just think that would be pretty cute. But honestly I love this so much and you are such a talented writer! :D
12/27/2013 c9 10horselovr171
I really like this story. It shows a softer side of Jim and his relationships.
12/26/2013 c9 CrystalVixen93
Love ur story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope u update again soon plz.
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