for The Knight of Mahora Academy5/14 c44 Kuro
Great chapter. Enjoy your creativity and how certain things you add to the story can give us a new perspective (like the negi/Nagi fight thing).
You have a lovely writing style.
And above all, a joy to still be able to enjoy updates.
Great chapter. Enjoy your creativity and how certain things you add to the story can give us a new perspective (like the negi/Nagi fight thing).
You have a lovely writing style.
And above all, a joy to still be able to enjoy updates.
4/15 c44 SlyFox9
Man it’s been forever since you’ve updated. But welcome back.
Anyway great fight scene between Naruto vs Ku. It’s been a while since I’ve read a good fight scene that didn’t involve magic or any enhancements. Good work.
Keep it up Attlon .
Man it’s been forever since you’ve updated. But welcome back.
Anyway great fight scene between Naruto vs Ku. It’s been a while since I’ve read a good fight scene that didn’t involve magic or any enhancements. Good work.
Keep it up Attlon .
4/6 c44 
17Ignisha
iirc, Chao is from a century or so in the future, right? May be misremembering just how far tho... Still, that means the Uzumaki longevity still works even across dimensions. Nice.
I never really thought about how much Negi wants to see his dad again that even a spar that'll only last minutes with no meaningful talk between them would be enough for him. My teenage brain never did connect those dots about how unfair Alb- Ku:nel was being. Poor kid, never gets a break.
17Ignishaiirc, Chao is from a century or so in the future, right? May be misremembering just how far tho... Still, that means the Uzumaki longevity still works even across dimensions. Nice.
I never really thought about how much Negi wants to see his dad again that even a spar that'll only last minutes with no meaningful talk between them would be enough for him. My teenage brain never did connect those dots about how unfair Alb- Ku:nel was being. Poor kid, never gets a break.
4/5 c44 SaintLeiker
Thanks for the chapter! A few days ago I saw images of Negima and I remembered this Fic
Thanks for the chapter! A few days ago I saw images of Negima and I remembered this Fic
4/5 c44 Ruksi
come on maaaaan, i need moooooooore, please, when will Naruto use KCM? thanks to all that time together i am sure it would be even easier than originally was
come on maaaaan, i need moooooooore, please, when will Naruto use KCM? thanks to all that time together i am sure it would be even easier than originally was
4/5 c44 Samuel Santillan
I liked it. It was a good episode.
Anruto's fight was incredible. This tournament has been very exciting since it started. I'm already looking forward to the next rounds and finding out if Naruto has any tricks up his sleeves for when he faces his old friend.
Now that I remember, our genius girl, who calls herself a villain and wants the world to know about magic, comes from the future. Right? She'll know who Naruto married in the future, right?
I liked it. It was a good episode.
Anruto's fight was incredible. This tournament has been very exciting since it started. I'm already looking forward to the next rounds and finding out if Naruto has any tricks up his sleeves for when he faces his old friend.
Now that I remember, our genius girl, who calls herself a villain and wants the world to know about magic, comes from the future. Right? She'll know who Naruto married in the future, right?
4/5 c44 Maelstrom Resurrected
Whew! What a chapter! I certainly also hope for the day that Naruto and Ku can have a 'real' fight someday! Man the next chapter can't come fast enough!
Not On The SidelinesStreet Fighter 6 Main Theme
Song by GRP, Randy Marx, and Rocco8082023
Yeah!
Every day I do this
Never fear of losing
And when I get up in the game
Yo I'm pure improvement
A real problem, but I solve em'
All facts proven
And if you think I'm gon fold
Then you talkin' foolish
Y'all wanna win let me spin boy
All dunks aside I'm super fly
Like I'm hangin' off the rim boy
I been winnin' for my kinfolk
And I put on for my city
From the intro, let's go!
I put that time in
My pride is out the roof
I get that grind in
So Ima tell the truth
I get my grind on
You know pressure makes all of these diamonds
I tell them get back
Step back
Fast track
Big laps
Big facts
I'm past that yeah
I'm trynna get ahead
Get out the way, now
Move forward
Stand back
Now break away I'm bouta bring it on
I ain't never backin' down (Come and step up to the plate)
For my city for my town (I'll do whatever that it takes)
Imma go and get the crown (Oh)
Imma go another round (Oh)
I ain't never backin' down (Come and step up to the plate)
For my city for my town (I'll do whatever that it takes)
Imma go and get the crown (Oh)
To the top, see the sight, see the sight, see the sights, yeah
It started from the ground up
Trainin' gettin' wound up
Channelin' ya inner self
And moving up this mountain
Crossing over passing bound
For the time to count and keep score
Breaking barriers I'd never thought I cross before
When I get tired on my knees
I gotta dig in the deep
I feel like I'm all alone
And really I just got me
I Stand
By Ashes
I went to win
No. Good. Byes
Have you just stood again
Hop out n I'm schemin (yeah)
Ride round n I'm dreaming (ok)
Once I get that feelin'
Nobody can stop me (ah)
Hit it I'm on go (go)
Fendin all you foes (foes)
Once I'm on a roll (roll)
I'm knocking down all the doors
I got the range
If u wanna come and stand up to me pull me now
If you wanna challenge tell me rookie run up on me now
I'm on the road to the top and I'm not looking back
I'm on the road to the top and I'm not looking back (try)
I ain't never backin' down (Come and step up to the plate)
For my city for my town (I'll do whatever that it takes)
Imma go and get the crown (Oh)
Imma go another round (Oh)
I ain't never backin' down (Come and step up to the plate)
For my city for my town (I'll do whatever that it takes)
Imma go and get the crown (Oh)
To the top, I see the sight, I see the sight, I see the sight, yeah
Whew! What a chapter! I certainly also hope for the day that Naruto and Ku can have a 'real' fight someday! Man the next chapter can't come fast enough!
Not On The SidelinesStreet Fighter 6 Main Theme
Song by GRP, Randy Marx, and Rocco8082023
Yeah!
Every day I do this
Never fear of losing
And when I get up in the game
Yo I'm pure improvement
A real problem, but I solve em'
All facts proven
And if you think I'm gon fold
Then you talkin' foolish
Y'all wanna win let me spin boy
All dunks aside I'm super fly
Like I'm hangin' off the rim boy
I been winnin' for my kinfolk
And I put on for my city
From the intro, let's go!
I put that time in
My pride is out the roof
I get that grind in
So Ima tell the truth
I get my grind on
You know pressure makes all of these diamonds
I tell them get back
Step back
Fast track
Big laps
Big facts
I'm past that yeah
I'm trynna get ahead
Get out the way, now
Move forward
Stand back
Now break away I'm bouta bring it on
I ain't never backin' down (Come and step up to the plate)
For my city for my town (I'll do whatever that it takes)
Imma go and get the crown (Oh)
Imma go another round (Oh)
I ain't never backin' down (Come and step up to the plate)
For my city for my town (I'll do whatever that it takes)
Imma go and get the crown (Oh)
To the top, see the sight, see the sight, see the sights, yeah
It started from the ground up
Trainin' gettin' wound up
Channelin' ya inner self
And moving up this mountain
Crossing over passing bound
For the time to count and keep score
Breaking barriers I'd never thought I cross before
When I get tired on my knees
I gotta dig in the deep
I feel like I'm all alone
And really I just got me
I Stand
By Ashes
I went to win
No. Good. Byes
Have you just stood again
Hop out n I'm schemin (yeah)
Ride round n I'm dreaming (ok)
Once I get that feelin'
Nobody can stop me (ah)
Hit it I'm on go (go)
Fendin all you foes (foes)
Once I'm on a roll (roll)
I'm knocking down all the doors
I got the range
If u wanna come and stand up to me pull me now
If you wanna challenge tell me rookie run up on me now
I'm on the road to the top and I'm not looking back
I'm on the road to the top and I'm not looking back (try)
I ain't never backin' down (Come and step up to the plate)
For my city for my town (I'll do whatever that it takes)
Imma go and get the crown (Oh)
Imma go another round (Oh)
I ain't never backin' down (Come and step up to the plate)
For my city for my town (I'll do whatever that it takes)
Imma go and get the crown (Oh)
To the top, I see the sight, I see the sight, I see the sight, yeah
4/5 c44 1FicReader of Desert
IT'S ALIVE! Finally! Atleast! I've been waiting for new updates for this story 10000 years! In Azkaban!(not really) I loved the chapter and reletions between Naruto and Ku and Kota. Also like similarities of Naruto and Chao. Hope that cliffhanger that you leave with Asuna, Eva and Al will be revealed soon.
See ya
Hope new chapters will come out more often!
1FicReader of DesertIT'S ALIVE! Finally! Atleast! I've been waiting for new updates for this story 10000 years! In Azkaban!(not really) I loved the chapter and reletions between Naruto and Ku and Kota. Also like similarities of Naruto and Chao. Hope that cliffhanger that you leave with Asuna, Eva and Al will be revealed soon.
See ya
Hope new chapters will come out more often!