for The Knight of Mahora Academy8/1/2013 c1 Endless Sorcerer B.Battler
konoka,setsuna with naruto if you want some ideas just read other negima/naruto crossover there a lot of them...
konoka,setsuna with naruto if you want some ideas just read other negima/naruto crossover there a lot of them...
8/1/2013 c1 Harmonian Shinobi
I vote for Asuna,Konoka,Setsuna,Mana,Kaede and Evangeline. Can't wait to read more of this story. Hope the next chapter will come out soon. And good job with creating this story. Also wish you good luck on your further chapters of this story or any other story you may write.
I vote for Asuna,Konoka,Setsuna,Mana,Kaede and Evangeline. Can't wait to read more of this story. Hope the next chapter will come out soon. And good job with creating this story. Also wish you good luck on your further chapters of this story or any other story you may write.
8/1/2013 c1 
1Vendiche
I've read a few Naruto/Negima crossovers before but this is the first time I read one that starts out like this. Very interesting. I can pretty much guess that Asuna is going to be for Naruto. As for other candidates, I would suggest the Konoka/Setsuna pair. Out of Class 3A, I like those two with Naruto the most. I honestly can't wait to see what happens next.
1VendicheI've read a few Naruto/Negima crossovers before but this is the first time I read one that starts out like this. Very interesting. I can pretty much guess that Asuna is going to be for Naruto. As for other candidates, I would suggest the Konoka/Setsuna pair. Out of Class 3A, I like those two with Naruto the most. I honestly can't wait to see what happens next.
7/31/2013 c1 zero
ako mana and yuna and asuma and makie and akira and chizuru for naruto harem
ako mana and yuna and asuma and makie and akira and chizuru for naruto harem
7/31/2013 c1 Mustang
nice start.
please continue
nice start.
please continue
7/31/2013 c1 eniox27
Huh you give a very reasoning with the harem, also thanks for writing the rarer Naruto works with Nagi story. For the harem "would you kindly" add Konoko, Kaede, Setsuna, Eva, Zazie, I don't know maybe Kazumi, Ako,
Huh you give a very reasoning with the harem, also thanks for writing the rarer Naruto works with Nagi story. For the harem "would you kindly" add Konoko, Kaede, Setsuna, Eva, Zazie, I don't know maybe Kazumi, Ako,
7/31/2013 c1 Kinunatzs The Eternal
it's interesting but has an horrible plot! even the Zanmaken: Ni-No-Tachi! can disperse the Incomplete Nine Shroud Mode it's not capable of breaking the Seal! it's empowered by a God of Death and a Human technique destroys the seal is beyond idoitic and to be logical Chakra can't be separated into Ki and Mana Naruto is in constant state of Kanka breaking it into two is beyond idiotic too! and the Imari is stronger than what you portrayed his in the Incomplete Nine Shroud Mode you know! Nine tails! even a Six give a massive destruction your just downplaying the Imari and all i can say is Redo the last part beginning where Eishun used the Zanmaken: Ni-No-Tachi!
it's interesting but has an horrible plot! even the Zanmaken: Ni-No-Tachi! can disperse the Incomplete Nine Shroud Mode it's not capable of breaking the Seal! it's empowered by a God of Death and a Human technique destroys the seal is beyond idoitic and to be logical Chakra can't be separated into Ki and Mana Naruto is in constant state of Kanka breaking it into two is beyond idiotic too! and the Imari is stronger than what you portrayed his in the Incomplete Nine Shroud Mode you know! Nine tails! even a Six give a massive destruction your just downplaying the Imari and all i can say is Redo the last part beginning where Eishun used the Zanmaken: Ni-No-Tachi!
7/31/2013 c1 Strife666
this is an awesome negima/naruto crossover. please update soon. for girls, well this is an altenate dimension so how about counter part characters like fem sasuke or fem haku.
this is an awesome negima/naruto crossover. please update soon. for girls, well this is an altenate dimension so how about counter part characters like fem sasuke or fem haku.
7/31/2013 c1 AceXY
Cool story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm guessing that Naruto will be a mage in this story instead of a ninja, right?
Cool story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm guessing that Naruto will be a mage in this story instead of a ninja, right?