
4/18 c5 CursesRevenge
Please no more gay jokes. Seriously, please no more; my ethics are biting me already. BUT ALSO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! This story is MARVELOUS and SO cool!
Please no more gay jokes. Seriously, please no more; my ethics are biting me already. BUT ALSO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST ANOTHER CHAPTER I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! This story is MARVELOUS and SO cool!
4/18 c4 CursesRevenge
In chapter two, Pitch and Jack joke about dark and edgy topics that I’m NOT a fan of. But, otherwise, This. Story. Is. AMAZING! IM SO HOOKED!
In chapter two, Pitch and Jack joke about dark and edgy topics that I’m NOT a fan of. But, otherwise, This. Story. Is. AMAZING! IM SO HOOKED!
4/18 c1 CursesRevenge
THIS IS SO WICKED AWESOME! I’m also having a ton of fun imagining Pitch as a teenager… X)
THIS IS SO WICKED AWESOME! I’m also having a ton of fun imagining Pitch as a teenager… X)
6/11/2019 c5
11Verinorina
omigosh I like this so muchhiauhdnksjd
never seen a fanfic where frost is frigging jacked with money

omigosh I like this so muchhiauhdnksjd
never seen a fanfic where frost is frigging jacked with money
1/22/2018 c1
11Yellowmiki98
Can you please continue? And also...poor jack. I really think Pitch did it. Probably everyone who has read this does. It’s so sad to learn that jacks dad doesn’t want anything to do with this, his sister and mom are dead and everyone else hates jack poor poor jack

Can you please continue? And also...poor jack. I really think Pitch did it. Probably everyone who has read this does. It’s so sad to learn that jacks dad doesn’t want anything to do with this, his sister and mom are dead and everyone else hates jack poor poor jack
11/1/2016 c5 Leo
Hey just wanted to ask what happened to the story i know you said it was not your best but I really enjoyed it so if ya could let me know
Hey just wanted to ask what happened to the story i know you said it was not your best but I really enjoyed it so if ya could let me know
5/28/2016 c5 Conan Shinichi Lover
I LOVED THIS STORY! I FINISHED ALL 5 CHAPTERS WITHIN 2 HOURS, IT WAS SO GOOD! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON! OH, PLEASE CONTINUE THE INVISIBLE DRABBLES BECAUSE THEY EXPLAIN SOO MUCH! THANK YOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO READ THIS COMMENT, HOPE YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY/ AND OR NIGHT!
I LOVED THIS STORY! I FINISHED ALL 5 CHAPTERS WITHIN 2 HOURS, IT WAS SO GOOD! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON! OH, PLEASE CONTINUE THE INVISIBLE DRABBLES BECAUSE THEY EXPLAIN SOO MUCH! THANK YOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO READ THIS COMMENT, HOPE YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY/ AND OR NIGHT!
1/2/2016 c5 Tiara
Where is the next chapter !
Where is the next chapter !
12/28/2015 c5
2Lil Moon Moon
I feel like crying for everything that Jack's been through... I mean... all this because a squirrel was murdered. I really love all the happenings... I HOPE PITCH ROTS IN HELL! He'll always be evil no matter what angle you look at him. PLEASE UPDATE FAST or IM GONNA DIE BECAUSE OF THE SUSPENSE!

I feel like crying for everything that Jack's been through... I mean... all this because a squirrel was murdered. I really love all the happenings... I HOPE PITCH ROTS IN HELL! He'll always be evil no matter what angle you look at him. PLEASE UPDATE FAST or IM GONNA DIE BECAUSE OF THE SUSPENSE!