for Divergent High8/2/2013 c1 FreedomIsn'tFree
This is really good. Keep writing because I want to know and read more. Keep up the good work! :)
This is really good. Keep writing because I want to know and read more. Keep up the good work! :)
8/1/2013 c1 
1The Silence Breaker
this is really good! i like how you made Max and Lauren. i can;t wait for Tris' resonance!
1The Silence Breakerthis is really good! i like how you made Max and Lauren. i can;t wait for Tris' resonance!
8/1/2013 c1 hypnotize-the-mind
This is really good ! Please post tomorrow! I think every story should be longer, because I love reading but it's at a really good length! Two thousand some words is perfect! :)
This is really good ! Please post tomorrow! I think every story should be longer, because I love reading but it's at a really good length! Two thousand some words is perfect! :)