
5/17/2014 c3 Jenni
This is freaking awesome! Please update soon!
This is freaking awesome! Please update soon!
2/23/2014 c3 Summer Flame
More This is really Interesting PLEASE!
More This is really Interesting PLEASE!
1/26/2014 c3
1Loadedxxamo
Sooo as of now she's not dating natsume...that's cool...that's cool...*crys*

Sooo as of now she's not dating natsume...that's cool...that's cool...*crys*
12/8/2013 c3 uwahhhh
More more more! You should add more detail. For example, during the concert you should say how the lights changed or how the setting looked like. I could see the motion but I couldn't imagine the story in an actual place. Otherwise, it is really good. Grammer is pretty good (I am a honor student in real life. I always tested out of grammer lessons - so don't argue with me about grammer. This is my secret addiction, fanfics. lol)
More more more! You should add more detail. For example, during the concert you should say how the lights changed or how the setting looked like. I could see the motion but I couldn't imagine the story in an actual place. Otherwise, it is really good. Grammer is pretty good (I am a honor student in real life. I always tested out of grammer lessons - so don't argue with me about grammer. This is my secret addiction, fanfics. lol)
10/15/2013 c3 Mickeyursofine
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!1im gonna die its so cute. by the way love the song choice. Animal by neon trees is my jam. omg the fedora and akira and hes so sweet! post the next one! i might die before the next chapter comes out because its so good
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!1im gonna die its so cute. by the way love the song choice. Animal by neon trees is my jam. omg the fedora and akira and hes so sweet! post the next one! i might die before the next chapter comes out because its so good
9/26/2013 c3
24Nispedana
Kyaaa! "They were about to kiss"... hahaha. darn you for interrupting them. hahahaha
Anyway, good chapter and will be looking forward to the rest. ;)

Kyaaa! "They were about to kiss"... hahaha. darn you for interrupting them. hahahaha
Anyway, good chapter and will be looking forward to the rest. ;)
9/17/2013 c1 Nispedana
Ahahahahah. Seems fun already! xDD
Great pilot chapter and I'll read the rest soon, promise!
Ahahahahah. Seems fun already! xDD
Great pilot chapter and I'll read the rest soon, promise!
8/30/2013 c3 Guest
Mikan is in a deep SHIT!
Mikan is in a deep SHIT!
8/30/2013 c3 AnimeMango
OMG! This is really good!I really like Akira and Mikan together haha!
OMG! This is really good!I really like Akira and Mikan together haha!